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A River of Memories

A river of memories flows through me Its current runs swift ~ past the willow tree

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Date: 10/31/2022 12:56:00 PM
My memories go incredibly quickly - here for a second, then gone before I can capture it.
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Date: 10/27/2022 9:37:00 AM
I'm glad it leaves that weeping willow behind. No llores! Good one gw. laf
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Date: 10/26/2022 3:24:00 PM
Hi Gershon, This is a delightful piece, concise and evocative. I’m most impressed. Sincere thanks for your review of my Brian Strand first place entry. Howard
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/26/2022 8:22:00 PM
Much appreciated, Howard. And congrats to you on your First-Place Trophy in the contest. Huzzah! Cheers, Gershon
Date: 10/26/2022 2:11:00 PM
I missed this beauty of a poem. Great one :)
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Date: 10/26/2022 8:22:00 PM
It looks like you're not missing it now, Heidi. Smiles, Gershon
Date: 10/26/2022 6:05:00 AM
I hope Kim is right my friend. Anyway your right we have to always be hopefull no matter what happens in life...
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/26/2022 8:24:00 PM
Yes! The best is yet to come, Michael. No doubt! :) gw
Date: 10/25/2022 4:33:00 PM
I hope that they were happy memories, Gershon. The weeping willow tree seemed relevant to me in your lovely rhyme. Take care, Shirley
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/25/2022 7:21:00 PM
Yes, the willow is the key... So why can't a willow be 'happ-y? I wonder!
Date: 10/25/2022 5:31:00 AM
Me too but I’m looking at the present. I realize that I need to move into the future. The past relentlessly torments but the future is bright. An example some songs bring bad memories…I’m done with that! Just ranting….lol
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/25/2022 7:22:00 PM
Rant away, my friend. lol. Seriously, I like your point: The best is yet to come. And I really believe that.
Date: 10/25/2022 4:38:00 AM
Thats lovely Gershon! Debx
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/25/2022 7:22:00 PM
Thanks, Deb.
Date: 10/25/2022 3:36:00 AM
Memories go flashing through our mind like a flowing river. It never stops though its tides may get softener or more furious from time to time. A cute little poem Gershon.
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Date: 10/25/2022 7:25:00 PM
Thanks for the nice comment, Valsa. May the river of your memories flow forever! :) gw

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