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A Response To Michelle Faulkner's Poem, Unstable

Knock knock knocking on heaven's door my knuckles are bleeding and still, you ask me, nothing more Thick red solid walls erected between us you labeled me and shipped me off to another Country ... leaving me with nothing more Defused, deprogramed, debugged, I walk away from your locked-in displaced shrug I am held in a makeshift prison of my own, though I tell you everything, you tell me nothing more; Knock knock knocking on Satan's door Sanctimonious roars from a placating hypocritical God no Pious gesture on my part, I am not conforming this misshapen piece of bread you offer me doesn't feed my aching belly, I show you everything I'm feeling while you, escort me, out the door. ps I wish to thank Michelle for speaking such cantillate truth.

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Date: 6/26/2022 5:54:00 PM
Rose, your poem is very eloquently written. Your response to Michelle's poem evokes very powerful feelings, so I can hear them. Take care of yourself, my dear friend.
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Date: 6/24/2022 2:51:00 PM
99% of the population has no idea what Free Will is...so they praise and blame God, when self is the culprit. Well expressed poem, Rose.
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Date: 6/24/2022 1:51:00 PM
The Lord shall provide. You can look elsewhere... but you will find no treasure there. Wonderful poem. Stay well my friend.
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Date: 6/24/2022 1:15:00 PM
I’m very sad writeMy friend.
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Date: 6/24/2022 1:07:00 PM
I hear the strong emotions you convey, Vienna in response to Michelle's poem: Knock knock knocking on Satan's door Sanctimonious roars from a placating hypocritical God... There's turmoil---angst of feeling locked in--dejected...
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