A Prissy Teacup

You give me a smile that only comes from you
I smirk in my dreams, understanding it fully
and what it means to us, my body and me

upon awakening I realize it had been six years
since I have seen that look….

loneliness has become my companion
like a carving knife,  it slices through my heart
when I look up and see a teacup with a flower
or a doily

you were prissy,
yet delightful
and I thought
mine….

you were more than a habit
you were my heart
I stare at joyful children
kicking leaves
and I see your eyes

I see you
in my dreams also
six years of you

tomorrow cannot fix the
loneliness of today
I pick up my pen
and begin to write

hoping I will not look up
to face another prissy teacup
for I do not know if I can bear one more…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Evans Avatar
November 18, 2020 at 5:54 PM
Really like this poem Caren. The line "tomorrow cannot fix the loneliness of today" is beautiful. Thanks for sharing...............peace!
Krutsinger Avatar
November 18, 2020 at 6:52 PM
Thank you my friend.
Ashley Avatar
November 18, 2020 at 11:58 AM
Caren, the intimate emotion of your poem is filled with wistful beauty. So very moving, your poetic expression is inspiring, touching the depths of my heart with its soft exquisite glow. Your last line is incredible! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Krutsinger Avatar
November 18, 2020 at 6:53 PM
Now I have to read my last line, thanks Susan.
La France Avatar
November 18, 2020 at 7:03 AM
Caren, beautifully penned, this touched my heart for it reminded me of my grandmas fancy cups that I inherited, they broke my heart and so in time, I donated them to a nursing home for their tea parties with the old folk and that made me smile at last (but I kept one beauty) _Constance
Krutsinger Avatar
November 18, 2020 at 11:45 AM
Thank you Constance. I donated my mother's dishes to my school last year, but believe it or not they were stolen a week later. (And it had to have been by the staff). Children are not allowed in the teacher's lounge.
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