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A POETIC ORPHAN

She sits alone Shunned by those that rhyme With sublime Ridiculed by the raucous And bellicose For of all the words It is said She is the only one That doesn’t rhyme With anything. She has ceased defending Her presence In the molten shades Of breaking dawns Her streaming brush stroked Sunsets She often sits alone Amid the seasonal splendor Of a New England Autumn Shuffling through the rustling Shades and shadows of her self. She knows who she is And that she does rhyme For to rhyme Is to blend easily Seamlessly take center stage Without seeking applause. She seeks no curtain call Only the crest of sunrise Act one, Scene one

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Date: 1/11/2024 2:47:00 PM
I really like this John it possesses a sense of intrigue to me…..Congratulations on POTD!!! Debx
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Date: 1/10/2024 11:09:00 PM
Beautiful poem, John, congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 1/10/2024 9:27:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD. It's a great description of the essence of poetry.
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Date: 1/10/2024 6:28:00 PM
She's simple, yet amazing in every way ! No reason to defend, when you're content. * Always be true to who you are * I soooo admire her attitude. Congratulations John, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 1/10/2024 4:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your fine POTD, John! An enjoyable read, my friend. Enjoy your day of recognition! Bill
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Date: 1/10/2024 3:18:00 PM
Congratulations, Dear John, on your brilliant poem as POTD. This is a question often comes to my mind too - to rhyme, or not to rhyme. For me, free verse wins, although I envy those poets who rhyme so effortlessly! Best wishes, John ~
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Date: 1/10/2024 2:13:00 PM
Poets should write the way that suits them best, regardless of thoughts of the rest. Congratulations John on receiving poem of the day with this splendid poem… Belle
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Date: 1/10/2024 1:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed your "Poetic Orphan" write/story. Great ending... Have a blessed day writing away................
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Date: 1/10/2024 1:06:00 PM
Congrats John, fo POTD! your poem resonates deeply. The solitary journey of the unrhymed words speaks volumes. The imagery of a poetic soul navigating the seasons and self-discovery is beautifully crafted. Bravo on capturing the essence of authenticity and embracing the sunrise without applause. - Blessings Daniel!
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Date: 1/10/2024 11:07:00 AM
- A touching piece of writing, John ... "She knows who she is" ... does not seek applause ... wonderfull - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs
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Date: 1/10/2024 10:21:00 AM
A word that doesn't rhyme...intriguing. POTD worthy and worth pondering, JL. :o)
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Date: 1/10/2024 10:02:00 AM
Superb John. You just keep getting better and better! Congratulations on the honor of POTD! :)
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Date: 1/10/2024 8:23:00 AM
Shades of Emily Dickenson here, a New England loner. Or perhaps a pugnacious protagonist sequestered in her room and world. A splendid painted picture of a poet's musing's, John Lawless. Congratulations on POTD! Brilliant
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Date: 1/10/2024 8:10:00 AM
Some tell the story without rhyming. Great write.
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Date: 1/10/2024 7:08:00 AM
Many congratulations John for a wonderful POTD. So well written, expressed. A great title too. I love the last stanza especially. Really enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing.
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Date: 1/10/2024 6:35:00 AM
Congratulations John, I love seeing one I've already liked as POTD :) I love the line "shades and shadows of her self" so poetic yet it didn't make me sick :) you're a brilliant poet and very deserving of the POTD honour
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Date: 1/10/2024 6:12:00 AM
Awesome POTD Mr. Lawless, sir
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Date: 1/10/2024 5:16:00 AM
She’s not alone anymore. Lots of poets are reading about her today. Congratulations on your POTD, John.
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Date: 1/10/2024 4:27:00 AM
Creative writing and congratulations on potd!
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Date: 1/10/2024 4:19:00 AM
returning to congratulate you on POTD honors. Fitting title..."to rhyme or not to rhyme," that's the question. Enjoy your day!
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Date: 1/10/2024 4:18:00 AM
Painting with masterful strokes. Congratulations John on POTD.
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Date: 1/10/2024 3:41:00 AM
Really nice, John. Terrific write...Congratulations on POTD! Cheers!
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Date: 1/10/2024 3:34:00 AM
No need to rhyme when free verse offers freedom to roam, Congrats on POTD
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Date: 1/10/2024 2:47:00 AM
John, wonderfully penned, congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 1/10/2024 1:18:00 AM
The caucus is raucous, but John Bolton said it's molten. Congrats on POTD, John. ~ Sunrise, sunset
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