Michael J. Falotico Poet Free verse

A Poem Rebuilt

I
 came 
        home
                and
                     found
                             words
   all over my floor with letters scattered .. 
I looked up and saw that my poem had fallen..
                              and
                         now
                        I
                 wrote
               it
         back
       to
   life.....

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Andrea Dietrich May 5, 2012 at 9:59 PM awesome,and it looks like a plane or a bird with this cool shape, so it's taking flight!!! Belated congrats for this one.

Carol Sunshine Brown May 4, 2012 at 6:09 AM Congratulations on your placement in "Contest 173" MJF. Love, Carol

Deborah Burch May 4, 2012 at 12:24 AM So awsome in its simplicity!!! I love it! Congratulations on your win Michael! big hugs ,love ya deb...kewl formatting ;)

Bob Quigley May 2, 2012 at 8:20 AM A very interesting write. Congratulations Michael

Barbara Gorelick May 2, 2012 at 7:43 AM It does look like an airplane! enjoyed and congrats. BG

Joann Grisetti May 1, 2012 at 5:13 PM I love these visual poems, but yours would work without the effects. i found it touching. Congratulations.

Debbie Guzzi May 1, 2012 at 3:27 PM wow looks like a paper airplane too! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Elizabeth Wesley April 29, 2012 at 8:38 AM How clever Michael; the form and the way you say it aree utterly fascinating!

Gwendolen Song April 28, 2012 at 10:21 PM This next book is gonna be a blockbuster with stuff like this!!! U did me proud!!! So glad I read this one and the circus entry both tonite..u are writing some outstanding stuff! Gwendolen

Russell Sivey April 28, 2012 at 5:38 PM What a great fluttering group of beautiful words that were put back together again. I love the fact that you took the time to find the correct rearrangement of letters that finds the correct words and to put them in the right places! This is a great example to an awesome poem, I love it! Excellent Work!!

David Williams April 28, 2012 at 11:57 AM Michael clever clever clever, me likes it my friend..David

James Peranteau April 28, 2012 at 11:49 AM *smiles* Very clever dear poet ! Have a wonderful weekend my friend....much love, james

Dinda Minardi April 28, 2012 at 11:08 AM A very great write, michael. Have a great weekend :)

Tracy Edwards April 28, 2012 at 10:52 AM Nice write Michael xx :)

Anne-Lise Andresen April 28, 2012 at 10:49 AM Unique done...... well written...I am glad you wrote it back to life again Michael. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Kash Poet April 28, 2012 at 10:22 AM Wonderful!!!

John Rhinem April 28, 2012 at 10:16 AM Smile ˜ Yeap, tis would be that of my own so called poetry; although, Your precious priceless heart's poetry tis much more beautiful and worthy to be acclaimed and called so then my own. ˜ Lovely ˜ My love, Always, John!:) ˜

Joe Flach April 28, 2012 at 10:09 AM Cute. Those words are forever scattered all over the floor of my brain - totally drive me insane!!!! You piece together some very nice poetry with your words, Michael. Sorry I seldom take the time to tell you so.