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A Poem Rebuilt

I came home and found words all over my floor with letters scattered .. I looked up and saw that my poem had fallen.. and now I wrote it back to life.....

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/5/2012 9:59:00 PM

awesome,and it looks like a plane or a bird with this cool shape, so it's taking flight!!! Belated congrats for this one.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/4/2012 6:09:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in "Contest 173" MJF. Love, Carol

Deborah Burch

Date: 5/4/2012 12:24:00 AM

So awsome in its simplicity!!! I love it! Congratulations on your win Michael! big hugs ,love ya deb...kewl formatting ;)

Bob Quigley

Date: 5/2/2012 8:20:00 AM

A very interesting write. Congratulations Michael

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 5/2/2012 7:43:00 AM

It does look like an airplane! enjoyed and congrats. BG

Joann Grisetti

Date: 5/1/2012 5:13:00 PM

I love these visual poems, but yours would work without the effects. i found it touching. Congratulations.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/1/2012 3:27:00 PM

wow looks like a paper airplane too! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 4/29/2012 8:38:00 AM

How clever Michael; the form and the way you say it aree utterly fascinating!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 4/28/2012 10:21:00 PM

This next book is gonna be a blockbuster with stuff like this!!! U did me proud!!! So glad I read this one and the circus entry both tonite..u are writing some outstanding stuff! Gwendolen

Russell Sivey

Date: 4/28/2012 5:38:00 PM

What a great fluttering group of beautiful words that were put back together again. I love the fact that you took the time to find the correct rearrangement of letters that finds the correct words and to put them in the right places! This is a great example to an awesome poem, I love it! Excellent Work!!

David Williams

Date: 4/28/2012 11:57:00 AM

Michael clever clever clever, me likes it my friend..David

James Peranteau

Date: 4/28/2012 11:49:00 AM

*smiles* Very clever dear poet ! Have a wonderful weekend my friend....much love, james

Dinda Minardi

Date: 4/28/2012 11:08:00 AM

A very great write, michael. Have a great weekend :)

Tracy Edwards

Date: 4/28/2012 10:52:00 AM

Nice write Michael xx :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/28/2012 10:49:00 AM

Unique done...... well written...I am glad you wrote it back to life again Michael. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Kash Poet

Date: 4/28/2012 10:22:00 AM

Wonderful!!!

John Rhinem

Date: 4/28/2012 10:16:00 AM

Smile ˜ Yeap, tis would be that of my own so called poetry; although, Your precious priceless heart's poetry tis much more beautiful and worthy to be acclaimed and called so then my own. ˜ Lovely ˜ My love, Always, John!:) ˜

Joe Flach

Date: 4/28/2012 10:09:00 AM

Cute. Those words are forever scattered all over the floor of my brain - totally drive me insane!!!! You piece together some very nice poetry with your words, Michael. Sorry I seldom take the time to tell you so.