A Pleasant Surprise

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Warm winds came when the least expected, With the buttery sun and crimson blooms. A natural surprise, a turn for the better, For fast rules need at times to be broken! And the windows opened to rich sunshine, As in came spring early, in days of wine.

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/2/2021 8:07:00 AM

Oh, if 'twere so! Bright, cheerful write Evelyn. A smile to read. :) Linda

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/2/2021 11:26:00 AM

Thank you, Linda. That makes my day. :=)

Judy Ball

Date: 2/26/2021 11:02:00 AM

Ah yes lets have the sunshine and the flowers and the days of wine and roses. Good stuff. God Bless, JB

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/26/2021 4:49:00 PM

Thank you, Judy. Your words bring joy. God Bless :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/26/2021 1:16:00 AM

Gracious write in this lovely poem. Could not see it earlier due to time difference.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/26/2021 8:38:00 AM

Thank you. Your words bring a smile. :)

Quoth Theraven

Date: 2/25/2021 8:11:00 PM

Evelyn, Truly pleasant surprise in your windows. -Richard

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/26/2021 8:36:00 AM

Thank you, Richard. :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/25/2021 7:32:00 PM

Hi Evelyn, Your poem is so lovely and inviting. It is a beautiful write ushering in Spring. Everything looks amazing. I enjoyed the view. Have a wonderful evening:-) Alexis

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/26/2021 8:35:00 AM

Hi Alexis, Thank you very much for your appreciative, cheery comment. Have a lovely day. :=)