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A Perfect Storm

It roared in the skies, as friends and foes ran for their dear lives. The skies were red and ember, like a hot coal. Everything miles away in the air, seemed to burn and fall like poorly fixed Christmas lights; someone coldly joked that the gods were hibernating - his shirt smelled like firewood mixed with burning rubber. Long before the storms, wind, water, earth and fire were celebrated as the elements which brought forth life, only for the same life to contaminate the four elements in the labs, with intent of annihilating nations. Yes, we humans are the said lifeforms - our thoughts evolved, reaching the stars! Somehow we got deluded, believing that we were gods on earth, turning our wheel of fate. The wheel of fate then turned against humanity, crashing his ideals, histories and identity with his own ego....

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Date: 10/8/2017 1:34:00 AM
Congrats Teddy on your win!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/13/2017 5:26:00 AM
Thank you so much, Hempstone! ;-)
Date: 10/7/2017 12:54:00 AM
Teddy - Congratulations on your well-deserved win with this wonderful write - blessings and keep up the great work, my friend! :-)
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/13/2017 5:25:00 AM
Greetings, Gregory. Thank you so much for your kind applause! Blessings to you too! ;-)
Date: 10/6/2017 10:05:00 PM
Congrats Teddy on a well thought out poem, that made it on the winners list in Craig's contest. Enjoyed this one immensely!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/13/2017 5:23:00 AM
Thank you so much, John! You are so kind! ;-)
Date: 10/6/2017 6:51:00 PM
Teddy, congratulations on your win in Craig's contest with this wonderfully penned write !
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/13/2017 5:22:00 AM
Thank you so much, BW! I really appreciate it! *^_^*

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