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A Penny For Your Thoughts

Contest entry: Forms: Sonnet (a,b,a,b) (c,d,c,d) (e,f,e,f) (g,g) Three stanzas and a couplet(a summary) .. Ten syllables per line You may search and find a saying to inspire you please include the quote on your work.. Please use_ A Penny For Your Thoughts as your title.. ------------------------------------------------------ A Penny For Your Thoughts Father said, son listen to that church bell Life just may beat you into submission Or drag you deep into a living hell To avoid that seek truth as your mission Sound of truth rings so very loud and clear Let goodness be your greatest living guide On that path the Light casts away all fear Your love and deeds you will not have to hide Son asks, dad how can I always be sure Will there not be days of terrible doubt My son, live your life seeking to be pure Then his love you will never be without Tis' the courage to continue that counts In this race , best we use our finest mounts Robert J. Lindley, 03-14-2015 Poem contest entry... Results shown: Poem Syllable Counter Results Syllables Per Line: 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 Total # Syllables: 140 Total # Lines: 17 (Including empty lines) Words with (syllables) counted programmatically: N/A Total # Words: 115 ------------------------------------------------------ Nationality: English Type: Statesman Born: November 30, 1874 Died: January 24, 1965 "Success is not final, failure is not fatal: it is the courage to continue that counts." Winston Churchill My quote chosen comes from the famous and brilliant quote from the epically great Sir Winston Churchill. I had to slightly rephrase the quote to meet the ten syllable requirement of the sonnet form used. ------------------------------------------------------------------------- Strikes me that the deepest thought we can ever have is this.... Where do we go after this life ends and how do we find that path? My poem gives the answer that so many reject...

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Date: 4/7/2015 11:29:00 AM
Congratulations dear Robert on a magnificent win! What a wonderful sonnet! Pandita
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Date: 3/31/2015 5:47:00 PM
Your poem has captured the spirit of “trust in the Lord" with words that awaken the faith that dwells in the hearts of most people. Well done. Emile.
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Date: 3/27/2015 5:39:00 PM
Awesome, well deserved win Robert. Congrats
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Date: 3/26/2015 1:51:00 PM
This is a very resonating poem! Congrats on the well deserved win!
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Date: 3/26/2015 9:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your first place win with this gem!
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Date: 3/26/2015 9:15:00 AM
Splendid write, Robert. Congratulations! Hugs and smiles for you and your beloved. KIM :)
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Date: 3/25/2015 7:42:00 PM
Excellent work! Congratulations on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 3/25/2015 4:20:00 PM
Congratulations on this top tier win Robert well done, finely penned sonnet.
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Date: 3/25/2015 10:33:00 AM
Congs, you're a winner, i like the pictures in this poem
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Date: 3/25/2015 8:11:00 AM
Robert, congratulations on your first place win in the contest with this wonderfully inspiring poem, I love the quote also, a perfect 7
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Date: 3/25/2015 7:58:00 AM
Robert, I want to thank you personally for entering the contest..I thank you for going to so much trouble in following the rules..I enjoyed the quote chosen and the topic upon which you wrote your poem..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 3/25/2015 2:46:00 AM
I am so impressed by this wonderful winning poem Robert. First Place and very deserving of it too! Big Congrats on your wonderful win my friend. Hugs, Connie 7
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Date: 3/25/2015 1:23:00 AM
Excellent Robert, congrats....Seren
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Date: 3/24/2015 7:24:00 PM
Excellent choice of quotes and I enjoyed reading your piece. we need more fathers like the one you describe here. Congrats on your win also; but mostly on the piece itself. It's a winner regardless.
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Date: 3/24/2015 3:22:00 PM
Robert, congratulations on your First Place win for your very thought-provoking poem! Sandra
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Date: 3/24/2015 9:05:00 AM
A well-deserved win. Many congrats.
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Date: 3/24/2015 8:43:00 AM
Congratulations on ur superb winning write Robert!
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Date: 3/24/2015 8:15:00 AM
Way to go! Congratulations!
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Date: 3/24/2015 8:13:00 AM
Congrats on your win Robert :) Stunning piece
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Date: 3/24/2015 7:22:00 AM
Big Congratulations Robert.. :)! I like the quote but I like more on how you elaborated it.. :)! comparing it to a father and a child.. :)!
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Date: 3/16/2015 9:28:00 PM
Robert this is amazing, absolutely loved this fine write, and the quote you based it on!
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Date: 3/16/2015 8:23:00 AM
Wow what an aweinspiring poem, how it is admirable in divine message and advice and awesome rhyme too, it is one of yer tour de force. Great to read u again.
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Date: 3/15/2015 1:18:00 PM
Dear Robert, Surely faith is the "finest mount" of all. It can carry our souls to eternal life. You gave some wise advice to your son and I'm sure this will do well in Sara's contest. Churchill has some great quotes and this is one of them. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/15/2015 9:48:00 AM
A terrific quote scribed by a wonderful Poet. An absolute joy to read this sunny Sunday, James :)
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Date: 3/15/2015 4:38:00 AM
This is a superb write with worthy content. I'm SO SO sorry that you got a N/A placement. I wonder sometimes. I have a blog up about these theme, Robert. For what it's worth...I think this poem is fantastic. Hugs (This is Eileen)
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