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A Peek At Perfection

As I walked along the way, along my path of life today, I felt a presence I’ve felt before. A feeling of peace I couldn’t ignore. Colorful leaves fell from the trees, The flowers alive with buzzing bees. All of it seemed ‘twas a part of me. The creation of God for all to see. I could see the Creator, through His creation. A woven spectacle of interrelation. The colors so blended without hesitation, Brought on a feeling of exhilaration. Each year they fall, before the first freeze, Soon to be escorted by the breeze. Loosening their grip from the trees, Fluttering down till they hit ground, are the leaves.

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Date: 11/13/2021 7:30:00 PM
Yes, indeed, to see the Creator through His Creation -- what greater joy and intimacy can there be?! Peace and Serenity, Gershon
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Bill Baker
Date: 11/17/2021 4:00:00 PM
Blessing to you my friend.
Date: 11/13/2021 2:32:00 PM
Perfect poem about fall and what joy it offers us--the leaves dance this time of year. Well done!
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Bill Baker
Date: 11/14/2021 7:02:00 AM
Thanks for the comments Sara, I know how much you love leaves. :-) Bill, Hugs
Date: 11/12/2021 6:23:00 PM
Hi! Bill. Thank you for a lovely poem. Blessings ~Debra
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Bill Baker
Date: 11/12/2021 7:27:00 PM
Thanks for reading and commenting on my poem Debra. Have a great day! Bill

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