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A Peaceful Smile

"Before the winds were born and there were signs of life,
 your beauty was already stirring inside my soul."

Star light shine down for me this night
for I may see just one more time
through hungry eyes
a solemn soul   still
in contemplation 

Strokes gentle in a sea of silk
reflected in a perfect way
showing beauty
unknown   still
seeing faults

Night carry your breeze to her side
blow away any guilt
leaving   just
visions    still
and a peaceful smile

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 4/27/2017 6:24:00 PM
missed this Tim it is absolutely stunning....loved it...Seren
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Date: 4/7/2017 9:13:00 AM
Sorry i am a bit late Tim, laptop problems. Congatulations on your Poem Of The Day for this wonderful write. It is well deserved my friend. An excellent write, a definite seven. Your Friend always....Mike.
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Date: 4/7/2017 12:05:00 AM
Congrats, Tim. I'm so happy for you.
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Date: 4/6/2017 9:45:00 PM
Thank you everyone for the great comments and congratulations on my poem. I wasn't expecting this.
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Date: 4/6/2017 8:47:00 PM
Lovely poem... congrats on being chosen....
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Date: 4/6/2017 6:58:00 PM
Wonderful poetic textures illustrating the properties of love, Tim. Most deserving of POTD honors. Stunningly beautiful poem. Love always.
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Date: 4/6/2017 6:02:00 PM
A beautiful, tender romantic poem and worthy of POTD 7+
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Date: 4/6/2017 5:50:00 PM
Tim, congratulations on having this lovely poem honored with POTD! 7 ; )
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Date: 4/6/2017 2:10:00 PM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/6/2017 10:49:00 AM
Your love poem beautifully reaches beyond life and time and leaves a soft touch on the soul.
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Date: 4/6/2017 10:11:00 AM
Lovely write Tim, an eloquent soulful adoration :) congrats on potd! xomo
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Date: 4/6/2017 9:42:00 AM
Beautiful - could apply to other than a lover - like a sleeping child.
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Date: 4/6/2017 8:35:00 AM
This is just beautiful! Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 4/6/2017 7:20:00 AM
Beautifully poetic, Tim: Congrats on being ' POTD.'Hugs, SuZ
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Date: 4/6/2017 7:18:00 AM
Your expressions are so beautifully stated..."strokes gentle in a sea of silk"
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Date: 4/6/2017 6:53:00 AM
Congrats on POTD, Tim. What a lovely poem.
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Date: 4/6/2017 6:09:00 AM
Good Morning Tim. I just had to return when I saw this entry was selected. Congratulations to you and your entry being chosen because it is so well deserved. Allow me to say once again that is is poetically beautiful. Have a wonderful morning and day.
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Date: 4/5/2017 7:50:00 AM
How delightfully romantic dear, Tim! Your Lady must be elated!
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Date: 4/5/2017 5:08:00 AM
Good Morning Tim. This is poetically beautiful. Read back your words and you will see why. Also Tim this is one of those entries that should be read out loud. Well done entirely.
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Date: 4/4/2017 6:01:00 PM
OMGoodness Tim this is a lovely poem and so romantic. "sigh" <3 Love this poem so much!
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Date: 4/4/2017 3:59:00 PM
When we truly love someone, we can overlook minor faults. I like the way you summon night's "breeze" to blow away her guilt and leave her with a lingering smile of peace. Your poetry comes from your tender heart, Tim. Beautiful!
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Date: 4/4/2017 3:30:00 PM
Terrific last verse, This is one of my favorite Tim Smiths...
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Date: 4/4/2017 2:54:00 PM
- Soft romantic ... lovely poem, Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/4/2017 2:12:00 PM
Now this is extremely romantic and so beautiful Timothu.Deserving a fave.
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Date: 4/4/2017 1:51:00 PM
"Before the winds were born and there were signs of life, // your beauty was already stirring inside my soul." This is so incredibly beautiful, from the very first lines onwards. A Fave for me my friend
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