A Passing Place

An age in our existence its story’s on my mind,
I find some sweet reflections in seasons passing by,
My soul yearns so, for that which ‘was’, 
A time of dust gold-wheat where timber stools sat by limpid pool
The taste of hard-boiled sweets,
With gathered friends where laughter rang, as smooth as Woodgrain worn,
So smooth was skin at seventeen,
Oh Lord let me go back for just once more;
I’ll right the wrongs; I’d sing that song that hid behind young lips,
To make Dad proud in his small world,
And Mom I’ll have your extra hug and kiss,
Then I’d say to all of them don’t worry in this flesh, of others 
Stares or unneeded cares, or the grudge you’re told to keep,
For the end will come to all these things much sooner than you think,
Don’t hold too long to pain and wrong
Life’s short so keep things sweet.

© Joe Maverick 09-01-2010
From Original draft 18-08-2009
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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July 4, 2015 at 11:38 PM
Joe, CONGRATULATIONS, on having your poem featured on the soup's home page. Enjoy the coming week. Take Care ~SKAT~
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July 5, 2015 at 8:29 AM
Hello Skat, thanks for the congratulations, Joe..'
Austin Avatar
June 29, 2015 at 1:44 PM
This is age speaking, right? I am so with you on this, but I'd sooner not go back. I call them the sweat days - never a dry underarm. Keeping things sweet, now this I love. Congrats on this fine poem being selected. Love, daver
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June 29, 2015 at 4:32 PM
Thank you for the fine comment here Daver..'
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June 29, 2015 at 11:09 AM
Joe, congratulations on having this beautiful write selected as a Feature poem for the week
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June 29, 2015 at 4:37 PM
Many thanks B W, good of you to comment so kindly..'
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May 17, 2012 at 1:43 PM
I'm sure your Mom and Dad would be very proud of their kindly accute, Joe! If we could go back t'would be a blessing, Joe, though I'm sure they'd felt your hugs and kisses along the way! The last few lines feel like a philosophical expression we should nurture and adhere to. Beautifully penned, Joe! Love, Mikki
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May 17, 2012 at 1:43 PM
I'm sure your Mom and Dad would be very proud of their kindly accute, Joe! If we could go back t'would be a blessing, Joe, though I'm sure they'd felt your hugs and kisses along the way! The last few lines feel like a philosophical expression we should nurture and adhere to. Beautifully penned, Joe! Love, Mikki
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October 25, 2010 at 1:28 PM
You are very wise, Joe. How I wish I could give my mom and dad just one more kiss. At 17 the skin is smooth, but the personality is still forming. Our values are rough. Wouldn't it be wonderful to go back to the teen years knowing what we know now. Indeed, life is short and I'm with you on keeping things sweet and letting go of pain. A new favorite for me! Love, Carolyn
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October 23, 2010 at 6:29 AM
Very well-versed. I like your writing style very much Joe. Thanks also for commenting on my poetry. Best wishes Taha
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October 22, 2010 at 4:50 PM
A truthful look into the future Joe and an enjoyable read presented so well ... enjoyed your creative theme tonight and I think we all wish at one time or other to retrace steps back in time..luv.. enjoyed ..happy weekend with luv..
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October 22, 2010 at 2:10 PM
Enjoyed reading your work... that comment you left was amusing also!
Mehta Avatar
October 22, 2010 at 12:42 PM
Very philosophical write- life is short and time is fleeting, Joe
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October 22, 2010 at 12:28 PM
I especially like the last line..We never how short it could be..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
Harris Avatar
October 22, 2010 at 10:46 AM
Very impressive poem, I hung on every word. One of my favorites I have read since joining this site.
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