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A Part of Me, a Part of You

Art splashed upon naked walls spilling life where water falls dams shall break, setting free a part of you,  a part of me Blues and reds and yellows blend painting stories that'll never end clouded magic becoming clear inhibitions lain, drawing near Blushed the light, furtive peeks gentle strokes grace her cheeks in vestal hands the palate pleads crimson tincts that touch up needs colored moments bleeding through it's a part of me, it's a part of you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 11/6/2017 1:08:00 PM
- Excellent at a high level, Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/6/2017 3:13:00 AM
Tim , the melody of colours spread to your lines so lovely! on how vibrant the hues are ending creates the darkest shade! thanks for the drop by.. hugs xx// Olive ELoisa :)
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Date: 11/5/2017 5:33:00 PM
I love the imagery in this one, and the ending where the title line is put, it's wonderful!
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Date: 11/5/2017 1:18:00 PM
This poem reads so well :) I love this Tim <3
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Date: 11/5/2017 12:58:00 PM
Dude this is seriously awesome
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Date: 11/4/2017 9:06:00 PM
Wonderful write, I see things om a few levels here! :)
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Date: 11/4/2017 6:04:00 PM
Tim, I like everything you write, but I love these rhyming verses.
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Date: 11/4/2017 3:18:00 PM
Lovely...furtive peeks may lead to long loving gazes. Great write, Tim...that ending was amazing.
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Date: 11/4/2017 3:16:00 PM
Tim this is a beautiful written poem. I sense this to be a painting of some sort. The way it is described I see it a beautiful scene.Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 11/4/2017 2:22:00 PM
I like it...and it flows... All the best to you Tim
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Date: 11/4/2017 1:01:00 PM
I love your use of colour in this romantic write and also the twist of the part of you, part of me line at the end:-) So lovely to see your romantic side is back tim:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/4/2017 12:31:00 PM
Excellent poem Tim! Very creative :)
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