A Part of Me, a Part of You

Art splashed upon naked walls
spilling life where water falls
dams shall break, setting free
a part of you,  a part of me

Blues and reds and yellows blend
painting stories that'll never end
clouded magic becoming clear
inhibitions lain, drawing near

Blushed the light, furtive peeks 
gentle strokes grace her cheeks
in vestal hands the palate pleads
crimson tincts that touch up needs

colored moments bleeding through
it's a part of me, it's a part of you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Andresen Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 1:08 PM
- Excellent at a high level, Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 3:13 AM
Tim , the melody of colours spread to your lines so lovely! on how vibrant the hues are ending creates the darkest shade! thanks for the drop by.. hugs xx// Olive ELoisa :)
Dietrich Avatar
November 5, 2017 at 5:33 PM
I love the imagery in this one, and the ending where the title line is put, it's wonderful!
Ella Avatar
November 5, 2017 at 1:18 PM
This poem reads so well :) I love this Tim <3
D. Avatar
November 5, 2017 at 12:58 PM
Dude this is seriously awesome
Vaso Avatar
November 4, 2017 at 9:06 PM
Wonderful write, I see things om a few levels here! :)
Lane Avatar
November 4, 2017 at 6:04 PM
Tim, I like everything you write, but I love these rhyming verses.
Manassian Avatar
November 4, 2017 at 3:18 PM
Lovely...furtive peeks may lead to long loving gazes. Great write, Tim...that ending was amazing.
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 4, 2017 at 3:16 PM
Tim this is a beautiful written poem. I sense this to be a painting of some sort. The way it is described I see it a beautiful scene.Have a nice evening my friend.
Michael Avatar
November 4, 2017 at 2:22 PM
I like it...and it flows... All the best to you Tim
Allison Avatar
November 4, 2017 at 1:01 PM
I love your use of colour in this romantic write and also the twist of the part of you, part of me line at the end:-) So lovely to see your romantic side is back tim:-) hugs jan xx
Sands Avatar
November 4, 2017 at 12:31 PM
Excellent poem Tim! Very creative :)
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