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A Painted Moment

In the deep blue tide Of sky inside the wings of Swan in flute like flight I seek my painted moment My bird into deep twilight ____________________________________ 12/4/2017 Contest Sponsored by Rick Parise

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Date: 4/13/2017 4:00:00 AM
Wow! What a pretty poem.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/13/2017 7:59:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 4/12/2017 5:11:00 PM
Hello Probir. And a painted moment it is. I love this. Honestly. The Tanka is in true form and theme theme is marvelous and with grand imagery. Well done entirely.
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Date: 4/13/2017 8:01:00 AM
Thank you so much, Lisa ...
Date: 4/12/2017 4:50:00 PM
Do you also paint Probir? Blue is my favourite colour, so I love the deep twilight painted deep blue.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/13/2017 8:05:00 AM
Yes, with the colors of paints from my mind ... and that you do know ... Glad you like the poem ... thank you ...
Date: 4/12/2017 3:08:00 PM
Beautiful Probir :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/13/2017 8:06:00 AM
Thank you, Heidi ...

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