Richard Lamoureux Poet Sonnet

A Noteworthy Passion

I wonder if a human heartbeat sings
Will lonely people witness perfect song
As Passion plays upon these lovely strings
What noteful kisses capture can't be wrong

Young bodies merging into blissful tone
She succumbs to his perfect passion pitch
True heartfelt music crushes even stone
The harmony of love makes them feel rich

Rise lovers pleasured treble heating air
Young dancers moving slowly within beat
A trumpet playing fuelling what they share
Each movement foretold in a music sheet

Praise lover's anthem written in the song
Yes music as a heartbeat beating strong


For Brenda Chiri's Sonnet contest
If you are going to have a first date do it in style!

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Freddie Robinson Jr. January 18, 2017 at 2:29 PM An original stylized poem in sonnet form, Richard. Unique wordplay and phrasing. I love the musical motif too. I'm hearing Carole King's "Jazzman" as I'm reading this. Real swing this poem has. Love is the air ... and this poem as musical flair. Beautiful poem. Love and joy to you.

Robert Lindley December 20, 2016 at 3:37 PM Truly fine sonnet-eering my friend. A pleasure to read such a high level sonnet! Superb...

Teddy Kimathi November 7, 2016 at 5:23 AM Congrats Richard, for your placement with this awesome piece!!! ;-) Richard Lamoureux November 7, 2016 at 8:15 AM Thanks Teddy.

Sandra Haight November 6, 2016 at 6:51 PM Back to congratulate you again, Richard, this time for the fine placement of your lovely Sonnet in the contest! Sandra Richard Lamoureux November 7, 2016 at 8:15 AM Thanks again Sandra. ;0)

Nette Onclaud November 6, 2016 at 9:50 AM music to my ears, rich... big congrats on your award..huggs Richard Lamoureux November 6, 2016 at 10:01 AM Thanks Nette! Hugs back to you.

Elaine George November 5, 2016 at 7:47 PM Lovely sonnet, Richard. Many congrats on your win. Lainey Richard Lamoureux November 6, 2016 at 1:11 AM Thanks Lainey. ;0)

Janice Canerdy November 5, 2016 at 6:13 PM Richard, Congratulations on your win in my contest. Thanks for entering! Janice Richard Lamoureux November 5, 2016 at 6:46 PM Thanks for placing it on your list Janice.

Joanna Daniel November 4, 2016 at 8:09 AM A very musical write, Richard:) congratulations on your POTD:) Richard Lamoureux November 4, 2016 at 8:12 AM Thanks Jo.

Keith Logan November 4, 2016 at 7:28 AM Pretty good. Much better if you kept the grammar correct all the way. Each movement foretold in a music sheet Praise lover's anthem written in the song ok, it doesn't sound so grandiose but it reads much more clearly. Richard Lamoureux November 4, 2016 at 7:59 AM Thanks Keith I took your suggestions.

Carol B. November 2, 2016 at 11:58 AM Congratulations on receiving POTD. Richard Lamoureux November 4, 2016 at 7:41 AM Thanks Carol.

Sandra Haight November 2, 2016 at 7:53 AM A lovely romantic Sonnet, Richard. Congratulations on the Poem of the Day honor! Sandra Richard Lamoureux November 2, 2016 at 7:57 AM Hi Sandra, thanks.

Rhoda Galgiani November 1, 2016 at 8:32 PM Really nice reading you - perfect Sonnet! GL in the English Sonnet Contest and congrats being chosen POTD - 7!...rg Richard Lamoureux November 1, 2016 at 9:55 PM Thanks Rhoda, it was a pleasant surprise.

John Hamilton November 1, 2016 at 5:17 PM I appreciate this piece even more as a trumpet player, nothing like a little Chris Botti to set the mood for romance! Congrats on well deserved POTD! Richard Lamoureux November 1, 2016 at 7:29 PM Thanks for the. Is it and great comment John.

Eileen Manassian November 1, 2016 at 3:38 PM Back to congratulate you, dear. :) So SO happy to see you honored like this. HUGS Richard Lamoureux November 1, 2016 at 7:30 PM This is a nice surprise. I am an infant when it comes to this form.

Paloma P November 1, 2016 at 12:33 PM Praiseworthy sonnet, congrats on potd, well deserved Richard! Richard Lamoureux November 1, 2016 at 7:30 PM Thanks and a big hug.

Maurice Yvonne November 1, 2016 at 10:05 AM Congratulations on your sonnet being chosen poem of the day. A great choice. Richard Lamoureux November 1, 2016 at 7:31 PM Thanks my friend, I hope I got the form right.

Maurice Yvonne November 1, 2016 at 9:51 AM You show your versatility with this gorgeous English Sonnet.

Anne-Lise Andresen November 1, 2016 at 8:41 AM - Beautiful sonnet, Richard :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. ! - hugs //Anne-Lise :) Richard Lamoureux November 1, 2016 at 7:31 PM Thanks Anne-Lise.

Daniel Turner November 1, 2016 at 8:39 AM Back to say congratulations Richard for POTD honors. Wonderfully done:) Richard Lamoureux November 1, 2016 at 7:32 PM Thanks Daniel I really appreciate you coming back.

Charlie Smith November 1, 2016 at 7:38 AM Beautiful work Richard, congratulations for POTD honors and best wishes in the contest... Richard Lamoureux November 1, 2016 at 7:32 PM Thanks Charlie.

Manmath Dalei November 1, 2016 at 6:28 AM Outstanding sonnet. A7 from me. Congratulation for POTD. Richard Lamoureux November 1, 2016 at 7:33 PM Thanks Manmath you are kind.

Arthur Vaso October 31, 2016 at 9:05 PM Such a romantic beautiful sonnet, this just flows off the tongue when one reads it! Richard Lamoureux October 31, 2016 at 10:52 PM Thanks Arthur. ;0)

Demetrios Trifiatis October 31, 2016 at 7:18 PM Wonderfully written romantic sonnet my dear friend, Richard! Good luck and a seven! Richard Lamoureux October 31, 2016 at 10:53 PM Thanks, a bit of luck couldn't hurt.

Mama Bear October 31, 2016 at 1:34 PM The romance flows from your pen and makes lovers think about what they should be doing Keep being expressive it makes the rest of the world think lovely thoughts Good luck in the contest You get a 7 from me Love Mom Richard Lamoureux October 31, 2016 at 10:53 PM Thanks mom, love back to you.

Eileen Manassian October 30, 2016 at 2:55 PM It's so good to read passion from your pen, Richard. You write it well. Richard Lamoureux October 30, 2016 at 3:24 PM Thanks Eileen, I haven't written many Sonnets so I'm glad this is okay.

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