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A Note In the Wind Nw

The note that's written tells the tale of star-lit nights of yesterday that is no more they have gone with the wind, and appear now in ashen dreams where memories cry, in an endless sky, that stretches across time filled with drifting faces I've kissed in revealing moments of romantic notions when hearts bloomed from hunger's yearning among the gardens of fragrant scents giving birth to emotional ecstasy, drenching the soul with sensual realms from the wondrous eyes of love this world of dreams and illusions, tumble across my mind, with a wind, tossed note, tied to the brambles of yesterday 10/26/22 contest A Note in the Wind sponsor Charles Messina

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Date: 11/2/2022 5:17:00 AM
Wonderful write, Frederic. So touching and emotional. Congratulations on your winning placement in my contest and as I just noticed POTD honors. Great Job, my friend. Charlie
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Date: 10/31/2022 3:21:00 AM
Full of emotion! Congratulations on POTD, Frederick!
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Date: 10/29/2022 3:55:00 AM
I'm so very pleased to see one of your fine creations as Poem of the Day, Frederic.
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Date: 10/28/2022 11:36:00 PM
Congratulations to you Frederic on the honour of POTD. Tom
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Date: 10/28/2022 9:00:00 PM
"memories cry, in an endless sky", "hearts bloomed from hunger's yearning", "tied to the brambles of yesterday" - great lines of poesy. A nostalgically beautiful poem with great images and imageries. Congratulations!
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Date: 10/28/2022 7:40:00 PM
I loved taking this emotional journey with you Frederic through fragrant scents and sensual realms. Congratulations on POTD! Blessings, Susan :)
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Date: 10/28/2022 6:26:00 PM
"Dreams and illusions, tied to the brambles of yesterday." A hopeful, tender thought, yet emotional in its context. The wind will always carry reality to another place, moments as well. This beautiful in every way. Congratulations Frederic, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. ~ Brandy
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Date: 10/28/2022 4:23:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD, like your quote... nothing collides with the world but you--Frederic Parker ...A soothing and inspiring piece, most of all I'm hooked!
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Date: 10/28/2022 11:31:00 AM
Frederic, your poem is beautiful, congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY, honor and best of luck in the contest, blessigns
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Frederic Parker
Date: 10/28/2022 3:25:00 PM
Thank you Constance for your kindness
Date: 10/28/2022 9:21:00 AM
Back with congratulations on your POTD. Poignant, soothing, nostalgic! BW ~ Mala
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Frederic Parker
Date: 10/28/2022 3:26:00 PM
Thank you Malabika
Date: 10/28/2022 8:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your P.O.T.D., Frederic!
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Frederic Parker
Date: 10/28/2022 3:29:00 PM
Thank you Milton
Date: 10/28/2022 7:51:00 AM
Riding the winds of life can be quite the ride at times, Federic. I enjoyed you POTD very much. Congratulations! Write On! my friend. Bill
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Frederic Parker
Date: 10/28/2022 3:30:00 PM
Thank you Bill, yes quite the ride
Date: 10/28/2022 6:56:00 AM
A lovely flight Frederic. Congratulations on the honor of POTD :)
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Frederic Parker
Date: 10/28/2022 3:33:00 PM
Thank you Linda
Date: 10/28/2022 6:50:00 AM
Congratulations for POTD :)
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Frederic Parker
Date: 10/28/2022 3:33:00 PM
Thank you Heidi for your kindness
Date: 10/28/2022 5:06:00 AM
So beautiful and powerfully poignant . I like the image of the note 'tossed by the wind and hooked on the brambles of yesterday' ! Well deserved POTD. Congratulations, Frederick !
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Frederic Parker
Date: 10/28/2022 3:45:00 PM
Thank you Valsa
Date: 10/28/2022 4:26:00 AM
Congratulations Frederick on this wonderful POTD capturing the yearning for lost loves. Make me want to leave a note tied to a bush somewhere. I wonder who would read it. Enjoy the Spotlight. SuZ
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Frederic Parker
Date: 10/28/2022 3:46:00 PM
Thank you, a passer-by perhaps
Date: 10/28/2022 4:09:00 AM
This is such a beautiful piece of poetry recalling nostalgic moments from the past. Congrats, Frederick, on having it honored as POTD. John
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Frederic Parker
Date: 10/28/2022 3:47:00 PM
Thank you John
Date: 10/28/2022 3:58:00 AM
A beautiful ethereal feel to this one Frederic, and a most deserving POTD, congratulations! cheers David
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Frederic Parker
Date: 10/28/2022 3:48:00 PM
Thank you David
Date: 10/28/2022 3:38:00 AM
Frederic, a beautifully penned poem, congratulations on POTD!
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Frederic Parker
Date: 10/28/2022 3:48:00 PM
Thank you Tania
Date: 10/28/2022 2:02:00 AM
- Beautiful poem, Frederic - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. and best wishes in the contest ... without a doubt a winning poem - Have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs
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Frederic Parker
Date: 10/28/2022 3:49:00 PM
Thank you for your kindness Sunshine
Date: 10/28/2022 1:55:00 AM
Great verse with emotional feelings. Congratulations on POTD. Good luck in the contest. Many Blessings my friend
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Frederic Parker
Date: 10/28/2022 3:50:00 PM
Thank you Eve
Date: 10/28/2022 12:57:00 AM
Oh wow! Beautiful write, Fredric ~ congrats on POTD
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Frederic Parker
Date: 10/28/2022 3:51:00 PM
Thank you Unseeking Seeker
Date: 10/26/2022 2:44:00 PM
Love this beautiful poem - with a unique connotation of a note in the wind. Enjoyed the soothing, charming images. To my Faves. BW ~ Mala
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Date: 10/26/2022 12:41:00 PM
Beautifully written and I like how you ended this too :)
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