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A Night Cap****adult****

Aching for my presence she called me late one night. She wanted to have a night cap, and she knows I do it right. Forty five minutes later, on the counties outer rim. I pull into the driveway, of her old Victorian. Striking lightly with my knuckles on the front door made of oak. she opens the door, powder blue negligee high heels. My jaw hit the floor. Caramel surprise, nude, she's dressed to kill. Candles glowing throughout the house relaxing music in the distance. She drops her robe, standing there, testing my resistance. The curvature of her waistline, tapering to long, well toned thighs. Breasts proportionate to her figure. Standing six foot tall is a beauty just my size. Unable to control my sergeant, she receives a standing ovation. Reaching down, she caresses me, what a wonderful sensation. I push her onto the mattress, forcing my way between her thighs. She twists and turns violently, whimpering a series of sultry cries. Jared Pickett 10/11/09 Asavvy1

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Date: 3/8/2010 8:21:00 AM
AND ... do u like leaving me breathless by not finishing the verses??? great write.. great words of description in your scenes... my kinda poetry as u well know.. shame we cannot find a site to appreciate tasteful passion and other kinds too..... am in NYC staying in Long Island with "friends" till Tuesday nite..since Friday.. having fun and shopping my u know what off... needed time to get away from all the drama with "honey poo" who is in Canada this week ..u know when the cats away ..."Sweet"
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Date: 10/17/2009 7:21:00 AM
Erotic, yet passionate to my eyes. Loved the write, you never seize to amaze me.
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Date: 10/17/2009 3:01:00 AM
Lovely poem Jared, it oozes heat and passion >> James
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Date: 10/12/2009 10:34:00 AM
Lanky steamy and dreamy,Smile, Sincerely, moses
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Date: 10/12/2009 6:56:00 AM
Hi Jared Very eroctic, dreamy. Maybe you should be writing harloquen books....You're good at it. I got to go get a cold shower now ha!! Thanks for sharing and for your comments. Have a great week, keep writing! Love Light Truth Patty
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Date: 10/11/2009 2:05:00 PM
Hot stuff! Love this!
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Date: 10/11/2009 11:41:00 AM
Steamy write Jared, "nude, she's dressed to kill" nice line...Raul
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Date: 10/11/2009 1:50:00 AM
steamy ..sultry...six foot tall..minus the high heels..pretty tall Jared.. excellent write.. excellent -Charma:)
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Date: 10/11/2009 1:33:00 AM
Jared, All that, lurking below the surface. Who knew? Hot and arousing. Well Done. Always, Will
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Date: 10/10/2009 10:54:00 PM
Oh my...I've been reading poems...Maybe I should make this my last one and go to bed with these thoughts on my mind...lol ENJOYED reading your poem...Marty
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Date: 10/10/2009 10:27:00 PM
Well, I know I'll be having steamy dreams tonight after reading this poem, Jared. Tastefully erotic, quite enticing actually. Now I'll go lie down and try to picture Brad Pitt walking through my door. Love, Carolyn
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