A Night Cap****adult****

Aching for my presence
she called me late one night.
She wanted to have 
a night cap,
and she knows I do it right.

Forty five minutes later,
on the counties outer rim.
I pull into the driveway,
of her old
Victorian.

Striking lightly with my knuckles
on the front door made of oak.
she opens the door,
powder blue negligee
high heels.
My jaw hit the floor.

                                                          Caramel surprise,
                                                    nude, she's dressed to kill.
                                                       

Candles glowing throughout the house
relaxing music in the distance.
She drops her robe, 
standing there,
testing my resistance.

The curvature of her waistline,
tapering to long,
well toned thighs.
Breasts proportionate to her figure.
Standing six foot tall
is a beauty just my size.

Unable to control my sergeant,
she receives a standing ovation.
Reaching down, she caresses me,
what a wonderful sensation.

I push her onto the mattress,
forcing my way between her thighs.
She twists and turns violently,
whimpering a series
of sultry cries.


Jared Pickett
10/11/09
Asavvy1
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Sweetheart Avatar
March 8, 2010 at 8:21 AM
AND ... do u like leaving me breathless by not finishing the verses??? great write.. great words of description in your scenes... my kinda poetry as u well know.. shame we cannot find a site to appreciate tasteful passion and other kinds too..... am in NYC staying in Long Island with "friends" till Tuesday nite..since Friday.. having fun and shopping my u know what off... needed time to get away from all the drama with "honey poo" who is in Canada this week ..u know when the cats away ..."Sweet"
Al-Khalili Avatar
October 17, 2009 at 7:21 AM
Erotic, yet passionate to my eyes. Loved the write, you never seize to amaze me.
Fraser Avatar
October 17, 2009 at 3:01 AM
Lovely poem Jared, it oozes heat and passion >> James
Freeman Avatar
October 12, 2009 at 10:34 AM
Lanky steamy and dreamy,Smile, Sincerely, moses
Sheart Avatar
October 12, 2009 at 6:56 AM
Hi Jared Very eroctic, dreamy. Maybe you should be writing harloquen books....You're good at it. I got to go get a cold shower now ha!! Thanks for sharing and for your comments. Have a great week, keep writing! Love Light Truth Patty
Brown Avatar
October 11, 2009 at 2:05 PM
Hot stuff! Love this!
Moreno Avatar
October 11, 2009 at 11:41 AM
Steamy write Jared, "nude, she's dressed to kill" nice line...Raul
Chircop Avatar
October 11, 2009 at 1:50 AM
steamy ..sultry...six foot tall..minus the high heels..pretty tall Jared.. excellent write.. excellent -Charma:)
Kershaw Avatar
October 11, 2009 at 1:33 AM
Jared, All that, lurking below the surface. Who knew? Hot and arousing. Well Done. Always, Will
Owens Avatar
October 10, 2009 at 10:54 PM
Oh my...I've been reading poems...Maybe I should make this my last one and go to bed with these thoughts on my mind...lol ENJOYED reading your poem...Marty
Devonshire Avatar
October 10, 2009 at 10:27 PM
Well, I know I'll be having steamy dreams tonight after reading this poem, Jared. Tastefully erotic, quite enticing actually. Now I'll go lie down and try to picture Brad Pitt walking through my door. Love, Carolyn
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