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A Mountain Road

A Mountain Road I stood upon a mountain road, So high engulfed in clouds, Gazing into a tiny valley, A thousand or more feet down. There were patches of green, And tiny specks of animals, A moving spot, a truck? A stripe of querulous mystery. A rainbow formed beneath me, Grand nature bidding awe struck. I wonder if a speck looked up at me, And wondered what moved on that mountain thread

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Becca Teagan

Date: 1/11/2017 4:21:00 PM

What a breathtaking views, and I love the pondering of what someone below sees when they look up! Very creative and nice to read. I saw your comment to Paul below, I can totally relate, I was freaking out when my husband drove us up pikes peak lol ~~ Hugs :)

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 1/12/2017 12:33:00 PM

Thank you, Rebecca. Those views are hard to express in words.

Wilfred Aniagyei

Date: 1/11/2017 3:13:00 AM

The imagery is so great.... Well done

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 1/12/2017 12:34:00 PM

So kind of you.

Paul Callus

Date: 1/9/2017 3:47:00 PM

I don't like being driven up mountain roads, but I love the view once I'm at the top! Your poem manages to take me with you...delightful scene I see! ~ Regards // paul

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 1/9/2017 6:22:00 PM

Thank you, Paul. I have that in common with you. I once rode in the floor of our car while my husband drove toooo fast up Mesa Verde.