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* This is a repost of an old favorite of mine *

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You lay among the sheets, as still as death itself, tho' your bosom rises-and-falls with gentle breaths. What do you dream, my darling? Oh surely, of fancies that shame this trembling night. Moonlight through louvers paints you - slices your form into porcelain shards of luster ... I wonder, are the dark portions mine? Have you and your god avowed a share to my madness? Or are they the stripes of your lord, given in redress ... to haunt me? Your eyelids quiver, dreams rolling them forth-and-back ... please let those meanderings be of us, When we were happy ... do you remember? Oh, such love we shared, those ages ago, far removed from the realities of a full moon and the fiery curse that sears my veins and marrow. How I long to press my lips to your eyes in waking, as then, but that is too close ... yes, far too close. Pray, what have I become, my love ... that I long for blood over being? If only you knew the monster, here, the beast, born of flesh, that considers you now in slumber, tossing a mental coin for your love ... or life. Please, please awaken now, my darling ... Drive a stake of passion through my heart, hasten, lest the hungers take me over, and you perish for the sake of this delirium ... Of the moon ... and me. ~ Honorable Mention ~ in the "Strand Special 12, Any Form, Any Theme" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor. ~ 3rd Place ~ in the "Give Me Goosebumps" Poetry Contest, Nina Parmenter, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 12/31/2019 11:02:00 AM
Congrats on your HM Gregory! Happy new year my friend!;)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/4/2020 6:45:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Brenda ... and a Happy, Happy New Year to you as well! :o) <3
Date: 12/21/2019 9:42:00 PM
Enjoyed this sensual read. Interesting the thought of obsessing about what is lying in someone's subconsciousness. You portrayed it with passion.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/26/2019 3:26:00 AM
Thank you so much, Juliet, that means a lot to me, as do all your opinions! Blessings, my friend! :o) <3
Date: 12/21/2019 8:08:00 PM
Wow! A bit dark. I like it! Merry Christmas, dear poet!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/26/2019 3:25:00 AM
Many kind thanks to you, Kim, I'm happy you enjoyed it! :o) <3
Date: 12/21/2019 6:55:00 PM
oooooh, I love where this one led!! Love them dark! I'm ok, how about you too, Greg?
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/26/2019 3:24:00 AM
Thank you so much, Buddy - ok ... not great, but ok. Blessings, Friend! :o) <3
Date: 12/21/2019 4:05:00 PM
You know you get me every time with your moon poetry, the title drew me in, I thought I recognized it but I think not. Wonderful phraseology "slices your form into porcelain shards of luster" are the dark portions mine? I'm speechless...what am I supposed to do fave every poem of yours?
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/26/2019 3:22:00 AM
Many kind thanks, John, yes, you recognized it - it's a re-post of an old one, and one I'm very proud of ... if I could write a whole book on this level I might make some money somehow, but ... music is calling me back! Blessings, Brother! :o)

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