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A Mirage

a mirage of love in a desert of loneliness a glimpse of hope far in the distance a string upon a labryth floor the key to open a long locked door the solutions to problems that cause much dismay the answer to prayers prayed that very day the cure for a sickness that ail a child despite patience there was quickness of time the clouds that bring rain to the dry the sun that brings the light after the darkest of nights such are those who spill love into our lives those temporary aquaintences with which we share delight the company of a pleasant stranger or the reunion of old, old friends accompanied by the welcome thoughts of what could have been the highlights of a journey too soon, come to an end fare well Charmaine fare well my new found friend hope has left and ending where love was suppose to begin they were only mirages of love in a desert that has no end

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/10/2009 9:02:00 PM
Oh John the last two lines say it all. A beautiful write. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 9/13/2009 12:39:00 AM
Great last couplet John,an inner poem in itself.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.
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Date: 9/11/2009 4:58:00 PM
Nicely done, sorry about the loss.
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Date: 9/11/2009 6:42:00 AM
Beautiful tribute--Celina
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Date: 9/10/2009 12:06:00 PM
Love the passion brought out in your words. I too love how the last two lines of your poem brings your words all together.
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Date: 9/10/2009 9:50:00 AM
A wonderful, heartfelt poem - and the last 2 lines are particularly fine John
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Date: 9/9/2009 7:25:00 PM
Beautiful poem in honor of great lady, I see she was blushing while reading. Smile, Sincerely, John Moses
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Date: 9/9/2009 6:05:00 PM
Hi John! This is such a heart felt piece, both sad and beautiful. I've missed your words and kindness. So glad to be back home. thank you for your thoughtful words of welcome. I pray to that all is well with you. I see I have a lot of catching up to do! I have missed so much. Love, Robin
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Date: 9/9/2009 2:24:00 PM
Charmaine is a delight and brings beauty and joy to the Soup. If she were to leave, she would truly be missed. She has such a wonderful, compassionate heart and shows kindness to all.
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Date: 9/7/2009 6:57:00 AM
I have walked that desert myself. Hope leaving and ending where love was suppose to begin. Very touching write, my friend. lainie And thank you for your kind comments.
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Date: 9/5/2009 11:26:00 PM
I was bewitched in this write simply wonderful ... kind regards Jayne Thank you for your kinds comments on my poem
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Date: 9/5/2009 9:22:00 PM
John my friend it is such a pleasure to read your poetry again please forgive my absence - Outstanding writing my friend - many similarities I can also see - I'm honored that you think so highly of my writing John - This poem is beautifully romantic and brings the desert to life in regards to the soul - God Bless you John - Wonderfully sad ending that just drifts through the heart of the reader, mj
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Date: 9/5/2009 7:05:00 PM
John, This well written poem overflows with beautiful words and thoughts. Having lived in the Chihuahua desert for about six years, I understand desert beauty and its fearful dangers. Love is like a mirage in the desert. Sometimes it isn't real or true and disappears with a second glance. Sometimes it is only a fanciful fantasy. Sometimes it is feared because of emotional dangers. But sometimes it is beautiful and endless, like the desert, and the beauty found in your words. Lovingly, Dane
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Date: 9/5/2009 10:20:00 AM
Interesting, John. Don't understand exactly but beautifully written. My grandson is to join the church Sunday and be baptized the following Sunday. Sara
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Date: 9/5/2009 9:19:00 AM
How wonderful and touching...sincere friendship is a treasure and honor...she will be proud and humbled I am sure......The Southern Belle
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Date: 9/5/2009 4:22:00 AM
Thanks John for this poem,im blushing now really,im honored that a talented poet like you would find time to write a poem about me..I'll do my best to find moments in being here with this soup family here doing what i love doing most,writing poetry...if its God's will...thanks my friend,you are a good man of God and one of my fav poets here and this writing is beautiful,going to my favs--charma
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Date: 9/4/2009 6:02:00 PM
Such a sadness to this farewell. Like an ancient tale of lost love. Well done, John. ~ Carrie
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