A Mirage

a mirage of love
in a desert of loneliness
a glimpse of hope 
far in the distance

a string upon a labryth floor
the key to open
a long locked door

the solutions to problems
that cause much dismay
the answer to prayers 
prayed that very day

the cure for a sickness
that ail a child
despite patience
there was quickness of time

the clouds that bring rain
to the dry
the sun that brings the light
after the darkest of nights

such are those who spill 
love into our lives
those temporary aquaintences
with which we share delight

the company of a 
pleasant stranger
or the reunion
of old, old friends 

accompanied by the 
welcome thoughts of
what could have been

the highlights of a journey
too soon, come to an end
fare well Charmaine
fare well my new found friend

hope has left and ending
where love was suppose
to begin

they were only mirages of love 
in a desert that has no end
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Babcock Avatar
November 10, 2009 at 9:02 PM
Oh John the last two lines say it all. A beautiful write. God Bless Phyl
Strand Avatar
September 13, 2009 at 12:39 AM
Great last couplet John,an inner poem in itself.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.
Culverhouse Avatar
September 11, 2009 at 4:58 PM
Nicely done, sorry about the loss.
Bloomsfield Avatar
September 11, 2009 at 6:42 AM
Beautiful tribute--Celina
Augustus Avatar
September 10, 2009 at 12:06 PM
Love the passion brought out in your words. I too love how the last two lines of your poem brings your words all together.
Curcio Avatar
September 10, 2009 at 9:50 AM
A wonderful, heartfelt poem - and the last 2 lines are particularly fine John
Freeman Avatar
September 9, 2009 at 7:25 PM
Beautiful poem in honor of great lady, I see she was blushing while reading. Smile, Sincerely, John Moses
Gass Avatar
September 9, 2009 at 6:05 PM
Hi John! This is such a heart felt piece, both sad and beautiful. I've missed your words and kindness. So glad to be back home. thank you for your thoughtful words of welcome. I pray to that all is well with you. I see I have a lot of catching up to do! I have missed so much. Love, Robin
Devonshire Avatar
September 9, 2009 at 2:24 PM
Charmaine is a delight and brings beauty and joy to the Soup. If she were to leave, she would truly be missed. She has such a wonderful, compassionate heart and shows kindness to all.
George   Avatar
September 7, 2009 at 6:57 AM
I have walked that desert myself. Hope leaving and ending where love was suppose to begin. Very touching write, my friend. lainie And thank you for your kind comments.
Eggins Avatar
September 5, 2009 at 11:26 PM
I was bewitched in this write simply wonderful ... kind regards Jayne Thank you for your kinds comments on my poem
Jordan Avatar
September 5, 2009 at 9:22 PM
John my friend it is such a pleasure to read your poetry again please forgive my absence - Outstanding writing my friend - many similarities I can also see - I'm honored that you think so highly of my writing John - This poem is beautifully romantic and brings the desert to life in regards to the soul - God Bless you John - Wonderfully sad ending that just drifts through the heart of the reader, mj
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
September 5, 2009 at 7:05 PM
John, This well written poem overflows with beautiful words and thoughts. Having lived in the Chihuahua desert for about six years, I understand desert beauty and its fearful dangers. Love is like a mirage in the desert. Sometimes it isn't real or true and disappears with a second glance. Sometimes it is only a fanciful fantasy. Sometimes it is feared because of emotional dangers. But sometimes it is beautiful and endless, like the desert, and the beauty found in your words. Lovingly, Dane
Kendrick Avatar
September 5, 2009 at 10:20 AM
Interesting, John. Don't understand exactly but beautifully written. My grandson is to join the church Sunday and be baptized the following Sunday. Sara
Scoville Avatar
September 5, 2009 at 9:19 AM
How wonderful and touching...sincere friendship is a treasure and honor...she will be proud and humbled I am sure......The Southern Belle
Chircop Avatar
September 5, 2009 at 4:22 AM
Thanks John for this poem,im blushing now really,im honored that a talented poet like you would find time to write a poem about me..I'll do my best to find moments in being here with this soup family here doing what i love doing most,writing poetry...if its God's will...thanks my friend,you are a good man of God and one of my fav poets here and this writing is beautiful,going to my favs--charma
Richards Avatar
September 4, 2009 at 6:02 PM
Such a sadness to this farewell. Like an ancient tale of lost love. Well done, John. ~ Carrie
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