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I am dreaming of a long ago day with tears two young girls are feeding ducks in a park one of the girls is me the other is my dead sister I still hear the screaming I see her slipping on snow in slow motion the truck brakes and her blood spreading and my mother screaming the sky is summer blue with clouds white we are at the beach two girls building sand castles and then running and splashing in the water then, on a picnic blanket eating but the screaming, oh the screaming never stops now, I am at her tomb weeping . . . ______________________ January 17, 2018 Poetry/Free Verse/A Memory Copyright Protected, ID 18-9832-57-01 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym. Submitted to the contest, Nightmares sponsor, Nayda Ivett Negron Third Place

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Date: 4/17/2018 10:59:00 PM
Congrats on your most deserving podium finish with this moving poem, BW.
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Date: 1/26/2018 12:04:00 PM
What a tear jerker of a nightmare, congratulations BW, well done...
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Date: 1/26/2018 10:24:00 AM
So sad, and well-written, Constance! Congrats! Janice
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Date: 1/26/2018 8:13:00 AM
Such a sad, everlasting nightmare, Constance, so well-written. Congratulations on your podium win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/18/2018 4:34:00 PM
You had me feeling the high and the low. Happy times and sad sentences. A great write about a tragic part of your life.
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Date: 1/18/2018 2:57:00 PM
A beautiful sad portrait, Broken Wings
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Date: 1/18/2018 6:16:00 AM
A sad depiction...but full of love and happy memories..well written, BW.
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