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A Lover's Whimsy

Sing me a song of rainbows, Paint me a poem so dear, Weave me a dream that will not unravel, Love me with words sincere. Sing me to sleep with a lullaby, A tender melodious song, With notes the color of rainbows, That hover and linger long. Paint me a portrait of lovers, That will stand the test of time. Write me a poem so dear and so pure, A masterpiece sublime. Weave me a life entwined with yours, A dream that will not unravel. Love me with words heartfelt and sincere, As we ride on life's carousel. 3/12/12 for Debbie Guzzi's Et Cetera contest

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Date: 11/14/2012 8:36:00 PM
There is much emotion in these lines. I like the many things that were mentioned that always keep the mind coloured with a fresh picture.
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Date: 3/20/2012 10:32:00 PM
Beautiful!!!
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Date: 3/19/2012 11:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Debbie Guzzi's "Et cetera" contest Kim. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/18/2012 6:42:00 PM
Such a heartfelt sweet..smooth write one to really be proud of Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 3/18/2012 12:49:00 PM
KIM, nice verse for Debbie's, contest.. Congratulations~always*PD
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Date: 3/17/2012 7:57:00 PM
I love a poem that rhymes and this one does so very nicely. Congratulations on your win, Kim. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/17/2012 5:37:00 PM
Awesome and nice poem,Kim.I love the rhythm and flow.....Congratulations on your superb win...
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Date: 3/17/2012 4:45:00 PM
wow, as you WOVE the phrases thru this one, you were writing a poem ABOUT weaving dreams!! GREAT job, the theme, the rhyme and meter, everything. Big congrats in the contest.
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Date: 3/15/2012 12:58:00 PM
lovely...... thought it was charming and I wish you luck in the contest
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Date: 3/14/2012 3:26:00 AM
all the necessary, for a happy relationship, well done in rhyme an flow....
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Date: 3/13/2012 5:44:00 PM
Beautifully said Kim, each stanza has such special thoughts to entrance the mind. I just loved the whole poem.:)
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Date: 3/13/2012 2:54:00 PM
What a sweet piece, Kim. Many congrats on your wins : )
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Date: 3/13/2012 2:04:00 PM
WoW Kim! You truly let out the poet in your soul with this one. Absolutely perfect in every way. Loved it. God Bless, JB
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