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     A wordless song drifts from your eyes
     with rhyme disguised in poems lost
     from heavens smile your heart replies
     assuming risk, no fear the cost

     You dare not weep to dampen dreams
     but pledge to take this hand of chance
     no less from love this passion streams
     in turn of fate not circumstance

     Left breathless from a lovers kiss
     this treasure found its place in time
     a pleasure true, no more than this
     not once rehearsed in pantomime

     Within each heart pure beauty lives
     When fancies flight is there to give

     04/04/2017

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Date: 4/4/2018 3:34:00 PM
Indeed I like your style. Come check me out when you can.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 4/5/2018 11:09:00 AM
Ok J. here I come...
Date: 3/9/2018 6:59:00 PM
An exceptional poem! A kiss ?? is a “wordless song drifting from the eyes...not once rehearsed in pantomime.” How poetically romantic. A 7. Best wishes and keep up the good work. RP.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 3/9/2018 8:02:00 PM
Thank you Rainbow...
Date: 3/9/2018 6:36:00 PM
A great sonnet indeed. Great reflections of true Love.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 3/9/2018 7:54:00 PM
Thank you Vasudevan.
Date: 5/10/2017 3:41:00 AM
I loved every line of this poem Charlie! You have elevated the kiss beyond bliss! 7 ; )
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Date: 5/10/2017 7:22:00 AM
I'm so happy you stoped by Connie, thank you...
Date: 4/28/2017 8:27:00 PM
Charlie, I felt the passion of the kiss in this poem. I think you found your true love. A 7
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/28/2017 8:31:00 PM
I have just noticed that I have commented on your poem twice.
Date: 4/20/2017 9:36:00 PM
This one is exceptionally? good. Do much deeper In love. Too good!
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Date: 4/20/2017 9:36:00 PM
This one is exceptionally? good. Do much deeper In love. Too good!
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Charlie Smith
Date: 4/21/2017 12:25:00 AM
Thank you Bawa...
Date: 4/19/2017 12:46:00 PM
Beautiful sonnet Charlie, so rich in love and appreciation, loved everything especially last couplet! a7
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Charlie Smith
Date: 4/19/2017 7:29:00 PM
Thank you John...
Date: 4/12/2017 1:32:00 AM
In a word Awesome Charlie. I simply cannot add anything more then whats been said already. This is very special indeed.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 4/12/2017 8:04:00 AM
You are so very kind Maria, thank you....
Date: 4/8/2017 8:52:00 PM
Pure poetry Charlie :-) Breathtaking in it's beauty with emotions that touch the heart, never to be forgotten. A special, cherished sonnet. a joy to read. fave, 7+ lynnxxx
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Charlie Smith
Date: 4/8/2017 10:24:00 PM
Such a special comment Lynn Marie, thank you...
Date: 4/8/2017 11:48:00 AM
Dear Charlie. You delivered a beautiful entry in perfect form. The expressions are ever poetic and in such a traditional fashion. Everything about this entry says poetry. We readers thank you. Well done entirely.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 4/8/2017 12:32:00 PM
I'm so happy you enjoyed it LISA, thank you...
Date: 4/7/2017 8:38:00 PM
this is beautiful, Charlie and thanks for reading Cinder Girl.
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Date: 4/8/2017 10:34:00 AM
Thank you Andrea...
Date: 4/7/2017 12:55:00 PM
This must be one of your best poems, Charlie! Beautiful, romantic, and above all it flows smoothly, rhythmically and metrically. #7 Regards // paul
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Charlie Smith
Date: 4/7/2017 1:37:00 PM
I do like this one Paul, thank you...
Date: 4/7/2017 11:41:00 AM
Charlie, this is an exquisite sonnet where love shines through and brings us on a higher plane :) Amitiés
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Charlie Smith
Date: 4/7/2017 12:30:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Marie...
Date: 4/7/2017 5:17:00 AM
This is beautiful for two reasons that are dear to me! One...the form...two...the content. I love romantic writes, Charlie, and this is romance, indeed. Also, I love the sonnet form. You wrote this with finesse.
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Date: 4/7/2017 7:53:00 AM
Thank you Eileen...
Date: 4/6/2017 10:15:00 PM
How beautiful this is. I can tell that this was inspired Charlie. : ) 7
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Charlie Smith
Date: 4/7/2017 7:54:00 AM
Thank you Connie...
Date: 4/6/2017 10:42:00 AM
What a beautiful sonnet, a fav for me Charlie!
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Charlie Smith
Date: 4/6/2017 9:15:00 PM
Thank you Arthur....
Date: 4/6/2017 7:52:00 AM
Reading your poem I felt Muse caressing my mind,dear friend, Charlie! A 7!
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Charlie Smith
Date: 4/6/2017 10:29:00 AM
Thank you Demetrios...
Date: 4/5/2017 6:19:00 PM
Beautifully penned by a true romantic, very strong finish 7+
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Charlie Smith
Date: 4/5/2017 7:26:00 PM
Thank you Cecilia...
Date: 4/5/2017 1:54:00 PM
Love this sonnet, Charlie. It moves so passionately like a Gypsy dancer. Such a romantic write. You make it so easy to feel the love flowing from your pen. Magnificence sparkling in ink. Love always, my friend.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 4/5/2017 2:02:00 PM
A wonderful comment Freddie, thank you so much...
Date: 4/5/2017 10:01:00 AM
Charlie oh such a lovely romantic poem!
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Charlie Smith
Date: 4/5/2017 10:22:00 AM
Thank you so much BW...
Date: 4/5/2017 9:58:00 AM
Hi, Charlie. You wrote of a lover's kiss being a treasure, and it is, but your sonnet is a greater treasure to all of us who read it.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 4/5/2017 10:21:00 AM
You are so kind Dear Lin, thank you...
Date: 4/5/2017 3:44:00 AM
very romantic traditional sonnet; i can't write this type, but envy those who can...thanks for commenting on my work :)
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Charlie Smith
Date: 4/5/2017 7:54:00 AM
Thank you Charlotte...
Date: 4/4/2017 9:02:00 PM
You dare not weep to dampen dreams...love it! Nice sonnet, Charlie!
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Charlie Smith
Date: 4/4/2017 9:55:00 PM
So glad you liked it Kim, thanks...
Date: 4/4/2017 9:00:00 PM
Hi Charlie, You've out done yourself with this sonnet. It is so beautiful and romantic. Well done. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis
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Charlie Smith
Date: 4/4/2017 9:54:00 PM
You are very kind Alexis, thank you...
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