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A wordless song drifts from your eyes
     with rhyme disguised in poems lost
     from heavens smile your heart replies
     assuming risk, no fear the cost

     You dare not weep to dampen dreams
     but pledge to take this hand of chance
     no less from love this passion streams
     in turn of fate not circumstance

     Left breathless from a lovers kiss
     this treasure found its place in time
     a pleasure true, no more than this
     not once rehearsed in pantomime

     Within each heart pure beauty lives
     When fancies flight is there to give

     04/04/2017

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Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 2/20/2020 1:52:00 PM

Sheer genius! Thanks for creating such beautiful writes! We look forward to more!

J Hamilton Gist

Date: 4/4/2018 3:34:00 PM

Indeed I like your style. Come check me out when you can.

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/5/2018 11:09:00 AM

Ok J. here I come...

Rainbow Promise

Date: 3/9/2018 6:59:00 PM

An exceptional poem! A kiss ?? is a “wordless song drifting from the eyes...not once rehearsed in pantomime.” How poetically romantic. A 7. Best wishes and keep up the good work. RP.

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/9/2018 8:02:00 PM

Thank you Rainbow...

Vasudevan Desikachari

Date: 3/9/2018 6:36:00 PM

A great sonnet indeed. Great reflections of true Love.

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/9/2018 7:54:00 PM

Thank you Vasudevan.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/10/2017 3:41:00 AM

I loved every line of this poem Charlie! You have elevated the kiss beyond bliss! 7 ; )

Charlie Smith
Date: 5/10/2017 7:22:00 AM

I'm so happy you stoped by Connie, thank you...

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/28/2017 8:27:00 PM

Charlie, I felt the passion of the kiss in this poem. I think you found your true love. A 7

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/28/2017 8:31:00 PM

I have just noticed that I have commented on your poem twice.

Bawa Talwar

Date: 4/20/2017 9:36:00 PM

This one is exceptionally? good. Do much deeper In love. Too good!

Bawa Talwar

Date: 4/20/2017 9:36:00 PM

This one is exceptionally? good. Do much deeper In love. Too good!

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/21/2017 12:25:00 AM

Thank you Bawa...

John Hamilton

Date: 4/19/2017 12:46:00 PM

Beautiful sonnet Charlie, so rich in love and appreciation, loved everything especially last couplet! a7

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/19/2017 7:29:00 PM

Thank you John...

Maria Williams

Date: 4/12/2017 1:32:00 AM

In a word Awesome Charlie. I simply cannot add anything more then whats been said already. This is very special indeed.

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/12/2017 8:04:00 AM

You are so very kind Maria, thank you....

Lynn Marie

Date: 4/8/2017 8:52:00 PM

Pure poetry Charlie :-) Breathtaking in it's beauty with emotions that touch the heart, never to be forgotten. A special, cherished sonnet. a joy to read. fave, 7+ lynnxxx

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/8/2017 10:24:00 PM

Such a special comment Lynn Marie, thank you...

Lisa Ricci

Date: 4/8/2017 11:48:00 AM

Dear Charlie. You delivered a beautiful entry in perfect form. The expressions are ever poetic and in such a traditional fashion. Everything about this entry says poetry. We readers thank you. Well done entirely.

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/8/2017 12:32:00 PM

I'm so happy you enjoyed it LISA, thank you...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/7/2017 8:38:00 PM

this is beautiful, Charlie and thanks for reading Cinder Girl.

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/8/2017 10:34:00 AM

Thank you Andrea...

Paul Callus

Date: 4/7/2017 12:55:00 PM

This must be one of your best poems, Charlie! Beautiful, romantic, and above all it flows smoothly, rhythmically and metrically. #7 Regards // paul

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/7/2017 1:37:00 PM

I do like this one Paul, thank you...

Anne-Marie Coreggia

Date: 4/7/2017 11:41:00 AM

Charlie, this is an exquisite sonnet where love shines through and brings us on a higher plane :) Amitiés

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/7/2017 12:30:00 PM

Thank you Anne-Marie...

Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/7/2017 5:17:00 AM

This is beautiful for two reasons that are dear to me! One...the form...two...the content. I love romantic writes, Charlie, and this is romance, indeed. Also, I love the sonnet form. You wrote this with finesse.

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/7/2017 7:53:00 AM

Thank you Eileen...

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/6/2017 10:15:00 PM

How beautiful this is. I can tell that this was inspired Charlie. : ) 7

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/7/2017 7:54:00 AM

Thank you Connie...

Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/6/2017 10:42:00 AM

What a beautiful sonnet, a fav for me Charlie!

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/6/2017 9:15:00 PM

Thank you Arthur....

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/6/2017 7:52:00 AM

Reading your poem I felt Muse caressing my mind,dear friend, Charlie! A 7!

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/6/2017 10:29:00 AM

Thank you Demetrios...

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 4/5/2017 1:54:00 PM

Love this sonnet, Charlie. It moves so passionately like a Gypsy dancer. Such a romantic write. You make it so easy to feel the love flowing from your pen. Magnificence sparkling in ink. Love always, my friend.

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/5/2017 2:02:00 PM

A wonderful comment Freddie, thank you so much...