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A Love Affair

~'My dreams fly on the gossamer wings of a butterfly'~ A swaying tube rose denying a dragonfly to sit and kiss it, a butterfly arrives there tube rose stoops and embraces. ======================== By:kashinath karmakar Contest:Six Lines of Poetry,Please Date:11th Sept.2011 Sponsor:Constance La France

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/19/2013 8:04:00 PM

so I see your number is 155, better than mine, kash. but is it even doing anything for you??

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/22/2011 7:12:00 PM

Back to this nice one of yours!! Don't you remember a poem which employed symbolism of someone being drunk and i think it was an image of a toddling person, like a child? I just can't think where it was or what the title was.But I remember you soupmailed me that I got its meaning wrong. How are you. I saw a scary movie today, paranormal!

Chiquitachiamaka Baity

Date: 9/18/2011 9:47:00 PM

Wow Kashinath.. this is great.. so beautiful..as always.... smiles....chiquita

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/13/2011 9:31:00 PM

wow, this is so awesome,Kash. Gosh, I hope it placed!! I'll have to go check out her list of winners. sorry I have not seen your latest posts. Joe was home two days and I gave him all my attention (well most of the time). about "him" that was a guy called "mr. nobody" (pure fantasy poem.

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/12/2011 4:04:00 PM

What a beautiful poem you have written! I love butterflies AND roses, so you can imagine how much I loved your poem!! I loved the happy poem!! You'll do well in the contest!!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/12/2011 12:44:00 PM

yes, got it right, bud!..come visit..:) lol, your alarm is off! :) huggs

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/12/2011 10:55:00 AM

wonderful words so vibrant Kash and that butterfly won ..yeah.. great intro quote my friend... good luck in contest by Constance..

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/12/2011 7:16:00 AM

i heard my alarm and same by, kashi.. wowow, a delicately woven piece that makes me swoon! :) huggs, nette.. soup mail!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/12/2011 6:53:00 AM

This one reads like a winning entry..Enjoyed reading this morning..I am glad that I chose this one to read..Good luck in the contest..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Yes, my work a great deal of the time is about more than meets the eye..Thanks..Sara

Constance La France

Date: 9/12/2011 5:20:00 AM

soupmail

David Williams

Date: 9/12/2011 4:47:00 AM

hey Kash, like this one,, good luck, thanks for the heads up..David

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/12/2011 1:00:00 AM

lovely poem Kash, good luck in the contest

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/12/2011 12:51:00 AM

such a lovely image, Kash. The poor dragonfly didn't stand a chance against the butterfly who wins the embrace. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/12/2011 12:01:00 AM

'My dreams fly on the gossamer wings of a butterfly' What beautiful imagery! A lovely poetic painting. Best of luck in the contest.