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A Long Forgotten Place

While wandering back to my days of yore, I see a path and know I must turn right. Through tangled weeds, I make my way. Before me is the cottage! In the final light of day it stands in shambles. Sky above bleeds crimson. Memories come flooding me. I wish that I could harvest the sweet love that shone forth from their faces! Now I see them in my misty mind’s eye. Far away - as if tossed by a tempest – they are gone, some to their final rest. My yesterday, gone too, was once a beautiful bright dawn. What used to be - for me - my saving grace will one day be a long forgotten place. 4/12/2018 For Joseph May's Ten Words Contest. And now for John Hamilton's 'Your best sonnet 2018' Contest

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Date: 7/23/2018 7:59:00 PM
Hello Andrea … a great sonnet that has that melancholy feel. Progress does steal our past I guess - thank you Andrea - Lindsay
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Date: 7/13/2018 5:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your awesome win. So beautifully written.... Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/9/2018 4:28:00 PM
Haunting verse, transporting the reader back, truly, to 'days of yore' --- Beautifully crafted sonnet, Andrea. Congrats on your trophy win! Best wishes, Gershon
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Date: 7/9/2018 9:51:00 AM
Congrats on your win. Thanks for the memories.
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Date: 7/9/2018 7:06:00 AM
How the places of our past fall into the worn bodies of time, and just like our memories they slowly become forgotten. this is a great sonnet to take a moment to look back at the past and feel something. congrats on your win
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Date: 7/8/2018 9:32:00 PM
Andrea, the poignant beauty of your sonnet is captivating. Congratulations on your fine win! Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Date: 7/8/2018 8:37:00 PM
Congrats on your win Andrea..
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Date: 7/8/2018 7:07:00 PM
Back again to congratulate you again on your win again! :)
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Date: 7/8/2018 5:41:00 PM
Great sonnet with lots of emotion. Congratulations Andrea.
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Date: 7/8/2018 1:07:00 PM
Lovely enjambment. Congrats.
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Date: 7/8/2018 12:35:00 PM
Congrats Andrea with another win, with this beauty!
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Date: 6/22/2018 4:52:00 PM
Back with another congratulations! Nostalgia.
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Date: 6/21/2018 7:13:00 AM
Back with more congrats, Andrea.
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Date: 6/20/2018 7:38:00 AM
Very good! Congrats on a second place trophy win! :)
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Date: 6/19/2018 5:40:00 PM
Poignant and beautiful. Congrats.
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Date: 5/7/2018 11:11:00 AM
A really lovely poem this is, congrats on your placement in the contest, it is indeed a beauty
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Date: 4/24/2018 7:30:00 AM
Indeed, that which we called home we shall eventually part from along with everyone else. A fine Sonnet, Andrea, congrats. Viv x
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Date: 4/24/2018 1:17:00 AM
Congratulations, Andrea on your win. Nothing is permanent .. great depiction.
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Date: 4/23/2018 8:01:00 PM
Powerful sentiments here, Andrea. It's harder to go back every time and see the changes we've missed. A nostalgic read indeed. Salutations.!
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Date: 4/23/2018 1:53:00 PM
A sentimental write Andrea...Congrats on your win..
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Date: 4/18/2018 4:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this nostalgic melancholy piece. Great imagery. Was walking right there with you.
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Date: 4/18/2018 10:37:00 AM
A wonderful sonnet, Andrea, I drive by my childhood home occasionally and picture my dad and I playing catch in the front yard. Congrats on your win. John
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Date: 4/16/2018 4:13:00 PM
Our memories, the next generations stories slowly fading. Nicely done Andrea. congrats on your placement.
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Date: 4/16/2018 1:56:00 PM
Back with congrats on your most deserving bronze medal finish, Andrea. Beautiful.
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Date: 4/16/2018 12:47:00 PM
This is great Andrea! When I visited the home my mother was born in and it was in shambles I could really relate to the bittersweet memories expressed in this moving poem Andrea. Congratulations on your top placement my friend! Excellent! xxoo
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