Get Your Premium Membership

A Lonely Star

‘You are the tea leaves I am the tea pot I the tiny snowflake and you the snow’ _Maria Williams days nights now empty how would she carry on without him by her side life had been a roller coaster together they faced it all she's left to carry on they’d been through so much over decades shared challenges life would never be the same they somehow always prevailed because they forever stood as one suddenly she stood alone she's now a dried out star he had been her sky he had been her sky AP: 2nd place 2020 Submitted on February 23, 2020 for contest POETIC LINES FROM A POETRY SOUP POET – MARIA WILLIAMS sponsored by SILENT ONE - RANKED 2ND

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 3/25/2020 11:09:00 PM
Line, great written poem from the one line and a big congratulations on your win in Silent One's contest-Stay safe and healthy my friend. Hugs Eve
Login to Reply
Gauthier Avatar
Line Gauthier
Date: 3/26/2020 4:14:00 PM
Thank you so much, Eve.
Date: 3/25/2020 2:31:00 PM
- A moving poem, Line ... well written :) - Congratulations on your win :) - Stay healthy and safe :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Gauthier Avatar
Line Gauthier
Date: 3/25/2020 10:51:00 PM
Thank you, Sunshine. Most appreciated.
Date: 3/25/2020 2:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement, Line. Good to see you posting elsewhere these days. A touching piece in line with the quoted author's approach; but every so different in other ways. Excellent.
Login to Reply
Gauthier Avatar
Line Gauthier
Date: 3/25/2020 10:51:00 PM
Thanks. Much appreciated.
Date: 3/25/2020 6:02:00 AM
A sad ending, nice take on the contest.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Login to Reply
Gauthier Avatar
Line Gauthier
Date: 3/25/2020 9:00:00 AM
Thank you. Most appreciated.

Book: Shattered Sighs