A Little More Time To Care

A Little More Time to Care

There was a faithful woman blind since birth.
She lived with “Mom” and never was a wife.
Her mother, over ninety, knew the worth.
The blind one bought a condo…her new life.

Later on, she, blind, suddenly died.
Young relatives for “things” quickly turned foes.
Soon death was overcome; her faith thus tried.
Priests blessed her; said, “Arise.” And she arose.

She changed her will; gave one priest everything.
A few weeks later, her dear mother died.
It seemed that life had dealt a bitter sting.
But death returned...together, they abide.

© © Dane Smith-Johnsen
February 3, 2010

Inspired by Poetry Soup member contest:  Believe in Miracles 	  
Sponsored by: Carolyn Devonshire
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Freeman Avatar
February 17, 2010 at 11:40 AM
"Congratulations" Dane. Agape, Moses
Guzzi Avatar
February 9, 2010 at 5:35 PM
The first 4 lines are perfect IAMBIC pentameter! perfection! Light & love
Dufresne Avatar
February 6, 2010 at 3:37 AM
Very well done on reportinb the beauty of the miracles Dane Ann. kCongratuylations on your win here! Robert
Dietrich Avatar
February 4, 2010 at 1:26 PM
A Big congratulations to you, Dane Ann!! sorry I missed this one earlier! LUv, andrea
Fraser Avatar
February 4, 2010 at 11:03 AM
Dane Ann, congratulations on your success in Carolyn's contest >> James
Devonshire Avatar
February 4, 2010 at 10:09 AM
I really enjoyed the "twist" in this poem that allowed the blind woman to live long enough to change her will. Terrific poem! Congratulations on your success in my contest. Love, carolyn
Brown Avatar
February 4, 2010 at 5:58 AM
Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest Dane Ann. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
February 3, 2010 at 8:24 PM
Congrats Dane Ann on your winning poem in the Miracles contest.. wonderful write and a well deserved win.. u are a blessing to this site... and to all who luv u... luv.. Linda-Marie
Johnson Avatar
February 3, 2010 at 6:13 PM
sCongratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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February 3, 2010 at 5:17 PM
great miracle, congrats in the contest!
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February 3, 2010 at 4:44 PM
Had to read this more than once. Thank you for sharing your story--worked so well in poetry form. Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's Miracle contest. Another honor for your to enjoy. Keep up the good writing. Karen
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