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A Lasting Love

A lasting love securely sustains dreams. Respect and adoration, the hallmark, Our hearts united cherish loves esteems. Meandering as one beneath moonbeams. Souls unified and strengthened on love's ark A lasting love securely sustains dreams. Enduring love remembers, so it seems. To join hurt-selves together, brighten dark. Our hearts united cherish loves esteems. The sparkle in each soul reflects sunbeams. Consideration bound to each remark. A lasting love securely sustains dreams. Although at times our senses meet extremes, An angry word will seldom find its spark. Our hearts united cherish loves esteems. In concert, we are wandering life's streams. Together, firmly trussed through life's embark. A lasting love securely sustains dreams. Our hearts united cherish loves esteems. © January, 23, 2011 Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Written for Poetry Soup Member Contest: 4 forms, 4 themes Sponsored by: Francine Roberts TOPIC: Lasting Love

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Kash Poet

Date: 1/26/2012 12:29:00 AM

Congrats Dane Ann on your win.Beautiful poem.

Greg Stanley

Date: 1/25/2012 9:37:00 PM

Dane Ann, a big congratulations on your win, Greg

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/25/2012 6:40:00 PM

HI, Dane Ann, and big congrats to you on your win in this contest. You sure showed how to do it!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/25/2012 8:58:00 AM

congrats Dane Ann on a wonderful and exciting win for this awesome poetry entry luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/25/2012 6:19:00 AM

Congratulations on the win in Francine's ""4 forms 4 themes" contest Dane Ann. Love, Carol

David Williams

Date: 1/25/2012 1:53:00 AM

Dane Ann congrats on your win, nice Villanele..David

Joyce Johnson

Date: 1/24/2012 10:39:00 PM

Congratulations on your lovely villanelle and win, Dane Ann. Love, Joyce

Francine Roberts

Date: 1/24/2012 9:18:00 PM

congrats on your 4th place win Dane Ann, just beautiful

John Rhinem

Date: 1/23/2012 8:37:00 AM

Smile ˜ Good Morning, Precious & Priceless Dane Ann * I Need To Apologize Unto Your Beauty For My Comments Made A While Back - I Was A Bit Beside Myself At That Time & I Have Always Your Loving Heart & Wonderful Faith ˜ This Is A Very Beautiful Poem & Message Dipped Amid The Light Of Loves Truths * My Love To You Always, John!:) ˜

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 1/23/2012 1:21:00 PM

Thank you, John, for your kind comments and especially for your apology. I had already forgiven. Love to you, too. Dane!

Kash Poet

Date: 1/23/2012 7:45:00 AM

Beautiful poem Dane.Enjoyed the read.Best wishes.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 1/23/2012 9:56:00 PM

Thank you for enjoying my poem. I love to ready your comments. Big Smiles. Sincerely, my friend Kash.