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Change Is Inevitable

Depression comes in many forms, including thoughts of suicide. And you start to entertain a multitude of sad and bewildering emotions that fester away in the back of your mind. Somehow your soul has lost its way, and you wander blindly amidst subconscious thoughts. And yet, suicide is not an answer. In fact; it's the direct result of a lack of answers, and is impulsive and nonretractable. A persistent deflating of one's self-worth fuels feelings that manifest as acid tears; bleaching the life out of dreams and wishes. And you seek refuge from the onslaught of life's compromises; hoping to find it within the quietus of eternal sleep. But if you give up on life, it means your demons have won. And like Shylock, death will claim its pound of flesh from those that have lost hope; and feel helpless. Wanting your misery to end, you may see no other way out. But give yourself time; if nothing else, humans are resilient and change is inevitable. (Free Verse) 10/6/2019 11/14/2022 2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 20 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Mark Toney

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Date: 10/19/2019 7:04:00 PM
Suicide results from a lack of answers a deepness of thought here, being patient in God's timing will hopefully keep us from listening to the wrong answers. Thank you for your choice to talk about a difficult subject.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 10/20/2019 9:14:00 AM
Thanks Dawne, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 10/7/2019 11:12:00 AM
Hi Emile: I've been around the block a few times and your words are as a mentor for the down trodden. I loved your poem!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 10/7/2019 5:32:00 PM
Thanks so much Ralph, you honor me my friend, Emile.
Date: 10/7/2019 8:47:00 AM
Wonderful counsel Emile, an example of social messages that need to be heard, there's a whole new generation that cannot cope with their new reality, so they take their lives. Suicide is actually stealing taking something that is not yours to take! Wonderful message and excellent execution!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 10/7/2019 9:03:00 AM
Thanks John, I appreciate your comments, we are of one mind my friend, Emile.
Date: 10/7/2019 2:53:00 AM
Jesus saves - Your poem is very deep emotionally and it sends an important message to its reader. Bless you with many more poems and grace, Gina
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Emile Pinet
Date: 10/7/2019 9:02:00 AM
Thanks Regina, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

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