Change Is Inevitable

Depression takes on many forms,
including thoughts of suicide.
And it leaves you entertaining a multitude
of sad, self-demeaning emotions
that fester away
in the back of your mind.
Somehow, your soul has lost its way,
and you wander blindly
through a minefield of self-destructive thoughts.
But suicide is never the answer.
In fact, it's the direct result of a lack of answers,
and is both impulsive and nonretractable.
A persistent deflating of one's self-worth
fuels feelings that manifest as acid tears;
bleaching the life out of dreams and wishes.
And you seek refuge
from the onslaught of life's compromises,
hoping to find peace within eternal sleep.
But you'll die alone, without ever having lived.
And like Shylock, Death will claim its pound of flesh
from those who love you and feel helpless.
You want your misery to end,
feeling trapped in a nightmare with no way out.
But give yourself time; if nothing else,
humans are resilient,
and change is inevitable.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 10/19/2019 7:04:00 PM
Suicide results from a lack of answers a deepness of thought here, being patient in God's timing will hopefully keep us from listening to the wrong answers. Thank you for your choice to talk about a difficult subject.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 10/20/2019 9:14:00 AM
Thanks Dawne, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 10/7/2019 11:12:00 AM
Hi Emile: I've been around the block a few times and your words are as a mentor for the down trodden. I loved your poem!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 10/7/2019 5:32:00 PM
Thanks so much Ralph, you honor me my friend, Emile.
Date: 10/7/2019 8:47:00 AM
Wonderful counsel Emile, an example of social messages that need to be heard, there's a whole new generation that cannot cope with their new reality, so they take their lives. Suicide is actually stealing taking something that is not yours to take! Wonderful message and excellent execution!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 10/7/2019 9:03:00 AM
Thanks John, I appreciate your comments, we are of one mind my friend, Emile.
Date: 10/7/2019 2:53:00 AM
Jesus saves - Your poem is very deep emotionally and it sends an important message to its reader. Bless you with many more poems and grace, Gina
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Date: 10/7/2019 9:02:00 AM
Thanks Regina, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
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