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When my sister died, grandma said, it would be okay, She lied, it was never okay again in my life, ever again; And as each person I loved died, she said the same thing, Then, when she died, no one ever said that to me ever again. Mom died and people said she was in a better place, And she is tending God's garden, really, lies, lies, lies; My mother is at Notre Dame Cemetery in a deep grave, Her bones rotting, don't tell me sweet lies to make it better. When I told my boyfriend Henri that I was going blind, He could not wait to leave and told me sweet little lies; Lies, lies, lies, he did not wait for further testing to happen, Seems the progression is slow, not until I am an old, old lady. I have had many friends in this tangled path of mine, And many- who I thought were true blue and forever; But, they were snakes striking out at my trusting heart, Then, I told sweet little lies when they called me on the phone. But the worst is when someone I respect and trust, Says let me tell you the truth, oh why could you not lie; Tell me a sweet little lie, why did you have to hurt me so, One little lie is all that was needed, not a dagger to my heart. Lies, lies, lies, sweet little lies, swirling and spinning, What is truth, what is a lie, God has promised me much; A paradise, a mansion with many rooms, and eternal eternity, Well, I will have to wait- were these sweet little lies or the truth. _________________________ June 24, 2016 Poetry/Narrative/A Labyrinth Of Lies Copyright Protected, ID 16-803-886-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Sweet Little Lies sponsor, Silent One Ninth Place

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Date: 7/9/2016 2:46:00 PM
Nicely penned, Constance. Congrats on you placement.
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Date: 7/9/2016 1:53:00 PM
Very nicely expressed little sweet lies. Congrats on your win my lovely smiling friend. A nice 7. Loved always, bl
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Date: 7/9/2016 8:29:00 AM
This is very good Constance, for me it was one of the best.
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Date: 7/8/2016 11:25:00 PM
This is so reflective as life itself seems to based on lies, small or white...we don't know why. Well done for the contest!Sunita.
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Date: 7/8/2016 5:03:00 PM
Broken Wings, this is so sad and it reaches depths of the insight behind your path..Congrats on your placement in the contest! :)-luloo.
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Date: 7/8/2016 2:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the 'sweet little lies' Premiere Contest, Constance. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 6/30/2016 4:22:00 AM
This is deep.
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Date: 6/28/2016 1:12:00 PM
A 7 Broken Wings, good luck in the contest....
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Date: 6/26/2016 8:54:00 AM
The heart bleeds to read your poems! I agree sweet little lies, at times, are better than stabbed truths! Good Luck, Constance!
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Date: 6/25/2016 9:41:00 AM
A very strong and deep write BW. It leaves me lost in contemplation.
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Date: 6/25/2016 1:02:00 AM
One of the strongest writes from you, and ideally placed , well done Constance ....ian
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Date: 6/24/2016 7:44:00 PM
You have me thinking about so many aspects of life with this poem, thankyou, I love the honesty. Ur poetic friend,lewis.
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Date: 6/24/2016 5:28:00 PM
It gets to the point where everything we are told, we doubt. I have always said, if they'll lie for you, they'll lie to you. I like this poem. As far as what comes next, that can only be discovered when there are no more lies to hear.
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Date: 6/24/2016 3:34:00 PM
yes,lies everywhere at every step. Thats an integral part of life.A marvelous poem BW!
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