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A Labyrinth of Lies

When my sister died, grandma said, it would be okay,
She lied, it was never okay again in my life, ever again;
And as each person I loved died, she said the same thing,
Then, when she died, no one ever said that to me ever again.

Mom died and people said she was in a better place,
And she is tending God's garden, really, lies, lies, lies;
My mother is at Notre Dame Cemetery in a deep grave,
Her bones rotting, don't tell me sweet lies to make it better.

When I told my boyfriend Henri that I was going blind,
He could not wait to leave and told me sweet little lies;
Lies, lies, lies, he did not wait for further testing to happen,
Seems the progression is slow, not until I am an old, old lady.

I have had many friends in this tangled path of mine,
And many-  who I thought were true blue and forever;
But, they were snakes striking out at my trusting heart,
Then, I told sweet little lies when they called me on the phone.

But the worst is when someone I respect and trust,
Says let me tell you the truth, oh why could you not lie;
Tell me a sweet little lie, why did you have to hurt me so,
One little lie is all that was needed, not a dagger to my heart.

Lies, lies, lies, sweet little lies, swirling and spinning,
What is truth, what is a lie, God has promised me much;
A paradise, a mansion with many rooms, and eternal eternity,
Well, I will have to wait- were these sweet little lies or the truth.

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June 24, 2016

Poetry/Narrative/A Labyrinth Of Lies
Copyright Protected, ID 16-803-886-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym. 

For the contest, Sweet Little Lies
sponsor, Silent One

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Flower Avatar
July 9, 2016 at 2:46 PM
Nicely penned, Constance. Congrats on you placement.
Devnath  Avatar
July 9, 2016 at 1:53 PM
Very nicely expressed little sweet lies. Congrats on your win my lovely smiling friend. A nice 7. Loved always, bl
Lamoureux Avatar
July 9, 2016 at 8:29 AM
This is very good Constance, for me it was one of the best.
U.D Palawon  Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 11:25 PM
This is so reflective as life itself seems to based on lies, small or white...we don't know why. Well done for the contest!Sunita.
Scars Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 5:03 PM
Broken Wings, this is so sad and it reaches depths of the insight behind your path..Congrats on your placement in the contest! :)-luloo.
Haight Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 2:56 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the 'sweet little lies' Premiere Contest, Constance. Hugs, Sandra
Mwashighadi Avatar
June 30, 2016 at 4:22 AM
This is deep.
Cheema Avatar
June 26, 2016 at 8:54 AM
The heart bleeds to read your poems! I agree sweet little lies, at times, are better than stabbed truths! Good Luck, Constance!
Inman Avatar
June 25, 2016 at 9:41 AM
A very strong and deep write BW. It leaves me lost in contemplation.
Mark Avatar
June 25, 2016 at 1:02 AM
One of the strongest writes from you, and ideally placed , well done Constance ....ian
Raynes Avatar
June 24, 2016 at 7:44 PM
You have me thinking about so many aspects of life with this poem, thankyou, I love the honesty. Ur poetic friend,lewis.
Turner Avatar
June 24, 2016 at 5:28 PM
It gets to the point where everything we are told, we doubt. I have always said, if they'll lie for you, they'll lie to you. I like this poem. As far as what comes next, that can only be discovered when there are no more lies to hear.
Chansarkar Avatar
June 24, 2016 at 3:34 PM
yes,lies everywhere at every step. Thats an integral part of life.A marvelous poem BW!
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