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A "hopeless" Diamond (In the Rough)

French trader Tavernier in a greed-inspired way Glared at an idol of a temple in Mandalay Prying a gem from its eye socket, a curse prevailed Tavernier died bankrupt soon after making the sale Louis XIV bought the stone, 1668 A gift to his mistress, Louis had it cut heart-shape For dabbling in Black Magic, this madam was burned A century passed with the curse’s power unlearned The diamond was then bestowed on Marie Antoinette For wearing it with boastful pride, Marie lost her head She lost respect from the commoners of her nation This gem has since been linked to the French Revolution Cut far smaller, the gem resurfaced, 1830 When a London banker bought the rock of infamy Henry Thomas Hope survived; the curse appeared to break For 70 years the Hope Diamond’s wrath lay in state A Hope heir’s marriage collapsed; his wife evoked the curse As she foretold, subsequent owners’ fates would be worse French broker Jacques Colot went mad, suicide his road Sultan “Abdul the Damned,” insane after being deposed Then to an American the Hope Diamond was sold Washington Post owner Maclean watched horrors unfold Other household members died, but it was Maclean’s son Ten years old, struck by a car, his Dad’s mind came undone Ultra-light ray tests caused the mystery diamond to glow With safety in mind, Hope’s eerie stone found a new home It remained locked on display in the Smithsonian Could it be to blame for all that’s wrong in Washington? Tragedy also tied to raiders of King Tut’s tomb Perhaps lessons can be gleaned from those who met their doom Robbing temples, burial sites, outcomes always bad Greedy souls’ quests for wealth can leave them totally mad So don’t expect me to purchase a diamond in the rough Considering this gem’s history, a sandstone’s quite enough

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/17/2011 2:56:00 PM
What a journey here. Very atmospheric. Such a message stated here...excellent job!
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Date: 3/16/2011 6:49:00 AM
A poem to learn from, wonderful poetic story, written way beyond my time here on soup. Glad to read it as a featured poem, Carolyn. Harry
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Date: 3/15/2011 5:05:00 PM
I missed this one before. Congrats on having this interesting tale featured. Vince
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Date: 3/15/2011 5:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Carolyn. Have a wonderful week and may you have baskets full of inspiration come your way. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/14/2011 2:03:00 PM
Congrats, dear Carolyn on this gem. Get it! Hardy har, har. Seriously, you come up with some of the most interesting stuff. I am such a fan. Love, Dave
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Date: 8/13/2010 6:27:00 AM
I am feeling the urge to go back and read poetry from earlier writing of my favorite poets today and this is the one I opened of yours Carolyn. I truly enjoyed reading it today and it is one of your best. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/7/2009 10:25:00 PM
Brilliant, flawless, full of color and light! You are a diamond, Carolyn, and nothing about you is rough! Bravo! Donna
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Date: 8/21/2009 6:56:00 AM
beautiful... you tell a tale so nicely. even though its not a tale and there is more to it than meets the eye, i soaked in the poem and felt pure delight. regards, Girish
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Date: 7/15/2009 4:20:00 PM
Carolyn congratulations on placing second in Nathan's contest - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 7/12/2009 6:18:00 AM
CONGRATLATIONS ON rAUL'S CONTEST MY GOOD FRIEND--LOVE YOU--CHARMA ;-)
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Date: 7/3/2009 8:31:00 PM
This is quite some work of the pen. Cleverly done as a quatrain, involving history, bringing up the theme of greed, for a diamond in the rough still has the potential to be the brightest, strongest stone in nature. It is scarry to look at things in ways of a curse, making your poem also spooky. Thanks for sharing a great work and thank you for your review of my poem. Caroline.
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Date: 7/2/2009 1:55:00 PM
such history, so learned, enjoyable, informative and educational! Light & Love
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Date: 7/1/2009 3:36:00 PM
You are amazing when it comes the history heaped in your works, Congratulations on your win in Nathan's contest! ~Trudy~
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Date: 6/30/2009 8:44:00 PM
Carolyn, love this poem. It is going to my favs. I too am a lover of history. And you have really brought it out in this one. Lots of Love, Misty
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Date: 6/30/2009 2:52:00 PM
Well researched info. Certainly a diamond in the rough. Congratulations on your win. Thanks for your comments on my haiku. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/29/2009 12:15:00 PM
A bit of a history lesson and a stunning poem all in one.. and very deserving of the second place win in the contest..I am happy with my honorable mention also
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Date: 6/29/2009 9:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Nathan's contest, Carolyn! And thank you for all your kind comments =]
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Date: 6/28/2009 6:30:00 AM
Congratulations Carolyn, your poems are also a great teaching tool, filled with such interesting historical information. WEll done!!
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Date: 6/28/2009 6:06:00 AM
Congratualtions Carolyn on 2nd place in Raul's contest, Love James.
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Date: 6/28/2009 12:47:00 AM
Congrats on your success in Nathan's contest Carolyn .Rgds Brian
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Date: 6/27/2009 11:15:00 PM
Carolyn, congrats with your placement in Nathan's contest...Raul
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Date: 6/27/2009 8:39:00 PM
Congratulations on 2nd place in my contest! Nate
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Date: 6/26/2009 9:00:00 PM
Great poem, im always intrigued by such tales, thanks for writing.
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Date: 6/23/2009 9:23:00 PM
another fabulous write my friend that has much history and knowledge wrapped around your talent of rhyme and flowing words and descriprtions,,good luck as if you will need it with this amazing write,,and as always my dear friend thank you for your personal words and especially for reading mine,,,blessings..Cecil
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Date: 6/23/2009 10:03:00 AM
Thank you so much for your very kind comments! Now, as for your poems: I love the way you write. There's something so special about the way you teach us things in each well-crafted poem. I admire the aestheticists for their "art for art's sake" but I admire this in all it's exact opposition even more. Poety for liesure, poetry for education. Do you teach? If not then I think you should! :D Nathaniel
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