A Hidden Culture

Why does this house of wax exist?
       May it be a landmark that would be missed?
Therefore, a demolition ball does not swing.
       There is a secrete room within its architect.
I discovered this.
       A source of unveiled mysteries erected as a repository.
On a table sits a crystal ball.
       I rubbed it and it showed me a new world of idioglipics, 
a cosmos of beautiful colors.
       Standing-up in the corner is a glass clock 
whose reflection mocked the walls.
       A man told me I was beautiful.
I did not fear the voices heard.
       They were filled with child-like laughter from 
a different universe.
       There were adults walking the streets of gold.
As I sit in an antique rocking chair, 
       I listen to people say that the omnipotent would be here today.
Nature was a visionary scene of beautiful flowers and the grass 
       was rich green.
The trees were tall and the weather was pleasant.
       The songbirds sing the songs of the sirens.
Archetypical this world was not.
       The clock chimed and I abscond.
As I open the secret chamber door, I looked back.
       The repository became a mural of hidden cultures.
I knew that tomorrow I would come again.
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Penned April 28, 2014!
4th Place!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Sirak Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 4:36 AM
This is absolutely stunning writing! Congratulations on a well deserved win, Verlena.
Walker  Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 10:34 AM
Thanks Monterey for you commentary and supportive remarks. Verlena
Dom Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 3:54 AM
This is an enigmatic write. Well done & Congratulations, Verlena!
Walker  Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 10:34 AM
Thanks Micheal for you commentary and supportive remarks. Verlena
Mehta Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 2:21 AM
A brilliant write on Rilke. Congrats on the win, Verlena
Walker  Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 2:22 AM
Thanks Dr. Ram for your commentary and supportive remarks. Verlena
A. Sharma Avatar
May 14, 2014 at 10:41 PM
Wonderful masterpiece my dear friend ! loved this one especially the last line,,,,i knew i will come back,,,great ! congrats on huge win !
Walker  Avatar
May 14, 2014 at 10:46 PM
Thanks for the supportive remarks and commentary Dr. Upma. Your words are enrichment to my poetry writings. Verlena
Johnson Avatar
May 14, 2014 at 9:03 PM
Very interesting and wonder filled. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Walker  Avatar
May 14, 2014 at 9:16 PM
Thanks for your supportive remarks Joyce. Verlena
Lamoureux Avatar
May 7, 2014 at 1:07 PM
You are most welcome, perhaps you can take some time to provide your perspective on some of my work. Hugs Richard
Walker  Avatar
May 7, 2014 at 1:14 PM
As I was planning to do today, Rick... Verlena :0))s.
Lamoureux Avatar
May 7, 2014 at 11:58 AM
A most interesting place to explore, I enjoyed the imagery. This is a marvelous wonder filled piece.
Walker  Avatar
May 7, 2014 at 12:52 PM
Thanks Rick for your supportive remarks... Verlena
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