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She twirls with fullest branches admiring her ornamental dress, patchwork of souvenirs, yesteryear’s arts and crafts - preschool to cool age. Silver tinsel fringe caught the light of blinking bulbs - white then blue, green and red. Bright eyes illuminate in the festive room. Flames a-crackle! Past trees would wear a star at their highest point, but now a little silly but mostly serious - an angel caps her pointy head, and handmade glassy-eyed ornaments shake with merry glee. Under her lovely dress, an infant, cooing like a newborn dove, joyfully jerking his little arms and legs. His very first Christmas tree, the grandest dame, smiles his way.

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Date: 12/18/2017 12:54:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Kim, for this delightful write! Merry Christmas - Bob H
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/18/2017 2:43:00 PM
Merry Christmas! Thank you!
Date: 12/17/2017 3:53:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Kim - Merry Christmas to you and yours! :-)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/17/2017 6:48:00 AM
Merry Christmas to all of you, too! Feeling blessed in this merry community of ours! <3
Date: 12/16/2017 7:10:00 PM
Congratulations, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/16/2017 7:25:00 PM
Thank you, Rhoda!
Date: 12/14/2017 10:27:00 PM
Congratulations, Kim on your win with a nice poem. I liked the way you brought out child and Christmas tree symbiosis.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/15/2017 10:44:00 AM
Thanks so much, Subimal! I always enjoy seeing an infant underneath the tree, admiring - a future tree hugger. :)
Date: 12/14/2017 3:11:00 PM
Congrat's Kim!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/14/2017 3:49:00 PM
Thanks, Mike! <3
Date: 12/14/2017 2:39:00 PM
Awe :) Kim, love the imagery. Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/14/2017 3:49:00 PM
Thanks, Eve! xx
Date: 12/12/2017 10:31:00 AM
Kim, I love to see a Christmas tree all decked out especially if the family spent time together decorating her. Best of luck. John
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/12/2017 11:29:00 AM
Thank you, John! :)
Date: 12/12/2017 9:22:00 AM
So fun and festive, Kim, Love your title!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/12/2017 9:26:00 AM
Thank you, Mike :) Merry Christmas!
Date: 12/11/2017 6:35:00 PM
Wonderful - makes me want to revisit the ornaments I used to use.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/11/2017 7:02:00 PM
So true! Blessings!
Date: 12/11/2017 5:00:00 PM
what wonderful personification Kim good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/11/2017 5:08:00 PM
Thank you, Jan! xx
Date: 12/11/2017 4:51:00 PM
I love this poem, it makes me feel warm and homely, good luck in the contest, regards, Kevin x
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/11/2017 5:08:00 PM
Thank you, Kevin!

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