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A Ghost of Gettysburg

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 Several years ago, we bought an old farm house.
 It was 3 miles down a dirt road beside an old millhouse.
 It seems this area was involved in a major war fight.
 Sometimes it would last all the way into the night.

 The Gettysburg battlefield was north of our lot.
 Some nights you can hear cannons firing if the weather is hot.
 It's as if the war was still going on and no one had won.
 There's been talk of apparitions. I know I've seen one.

 This old house was once a hospital for the wounded and sick.
 We uncovered many relics as we cleared around the creek.
 There were human remains in the cellar, under the old dirt floor.
 It was determined to be a Confederate from the Civil War.

 As we remolded the house, many artifacts were found.
 The ghost who was living here was making knocking sounds.
 I know he's not happy as objects would fly off the wall.
 This spirit was having a tantrum, throwing objects down the hall.

 Things finally settled down. It was early morning, around two.
 We heard footsteps approach, clop, clop, the sound of shoes.
 The door suddenly opened. It was a man dressed in gray.
 An apparition of a Confederate soldier who has come back to his grave.

 We were very scared. "Were are not giving up on this place".
 We're prepared to cast this spirit out without any haste.
 We called in a team of ghost experts to help this troubled soul.
 We hope they can help him. That was our goal.

 The team had arrived to investigate what was going on.
 They captured two "EVPs" just before dawn.
 That revealed "GET OUT" and "My name is John".
 They respectfully said, "John, you've died." It's time to move on.

 The ghost of John still haunts there today.
 If you like ghost adventures, you are welcome to stay.
 "Beware" John takes tatum's, his demeanor will scare.
 The house is now a B & B. We can no longer live there.



                          Written on 1-7-2022
                                ** Fiction**

                     A STRAND (1071) Poetry Contest
                         Sponsored by: Brian Strand
                                     ~ 1st ~
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Rebstock Avatar
August 15, 2022 at 4:15 PM
Fascinating poem story. One I will remember.
Laurie Avatar
February 19, 2022 at 4:02 PM
Hello Debra ... a very enjoyable poem to read. I can only imagine living in a house that has all that history - thank you Debra - Lindsay
Brown Avatar
February 19, 2022 at 6:35 PM
Lindsay, Thanks for your encourgement.Happy you enjoyed the poem. Blessings ~ Debra
Goldsmith Avatar
February 12, 2022 at 7:31 AM
Back with "Congratulations" on your win. A wonderful story/write with picture. Have a great/blessed~~day/weekend..............
Brown Avatar
February 12, 2022 at 1:01 PM
I just found out about this contest, I have to check the back log of contests. Thanks Paula, you are so sweet to comment. Hugs ~ Debra
Goldsmith Avatar
January 15, 2022 at 11:16 AM
WOW!!! What a story/write and picture. I wish you would write more. Love This One. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away....................
Brown Avatar
January 15, 2022 at 1:03 PM
Thanks, Paula thanks for your encourgement. Blessings ~ Debra
Kiser Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 4:02 PM
I don't think anything creates a haunting like a war and the Civil war left behind a lot of trauma. A great piece about this house.
Brown Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 5:18 PM
M.L. I agree with you, the battle field has been well known for sightings of ghosts. Thanks ,I enjoyed your comment. ~ Debra
Ball Avatar
January 10, 2022 at 10:58 PM
WoW! What a spooky story. You should have told this one at Halloween. Really good stuff. Great imagery. God Bless, JB
Brown Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 2:03 PM
Thanks Judy. I am so glad you enjoyed the story, thanks for the words of encouragement. Blessing ~ Debra
M  Avatar
January 10, 2022 at 8:11 PM
Hi Debra….what a great scary story I didn’t want it to end! Well written my friend! Debxx
Brown Avatar
January 10, 2022 at 8:28 PM
Deb, thank you so much for your positive remarks. I'm glad you like the poetry. Blessings Debra
Rodrigues Avatar
January 10, 2022 at 3:42 AM
A well written ghost story. Nicely done, Debra!
Brown Avatar
January 10, 2022 at 6:32 PM
Thanks you Kim for your encourgement. Blessings ~ Debra
Deo Avatar
January 10, 2022 at 12:01 AM
You did inform readers, "Fiction." Your writing was so firsthand and believable. Congrats for using different & varied writing styles Sis Debra. Shalom, shalom
Brown Avatar
January 10, 2022 at 6:41 PM
Hello! Brother Anil, I appreciate your encouragement. Best wishes and Prayers Debra
George Avatar
January 9, 2022 at 8:07 PM
This sounds so scary and realistic with the background of the Civil war and the Gettysburg battlefield as the back drop. All the Best in the contest Debra !
Brown Avatar
January 9, 2022 at 8:20 PM
Gettysburg has always been an active sight for ghosts. Thanks Valsa It's always a pleasure to see your smiling face. Blessing ~ Debra
Baker Avatar
January 9, 2022 at 3:03 PM
A good ghost poem. I enjoyed reading and picturing your imagery, Debra. Good luck in the contest. Hugs, Bill
Brown Avatar
January 9, 2022 at 3:22 PM
Hi, Bill. Thanks for your comments and your encouragement. Blessings ~ Debra
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January 9, 2022 at 2:39 PM
Hello Debra Brown, I was there at the Gettsburg's I travelled wjth my parents at that time. We went to see the site of the battle ground. The tour guide told us the history of that time. I noticed there was nothing there to protect them from danger. It was a very sad history. It made me cry. Yes i do believe that the bed & breakfast would be haunted. I would not want to stay there. Enjoy your evening my friend. Hugs.
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January 10, 2022 at 3:36 PM
Hello Debra I still remember it. It was so sad to hear what these people went through during that time. It was there I enjoyed a Mississippi mud pie. oh -I can just taste it. Yum! Enjoy your evening . Hugs.
Brown Avatar
January 9, 2022 at 3:14 PM
Hello! Darlen, I enjoyed your comment. Over the years, I've visited various battlegrounds. The most interesting place for me was Gettysburg. It seemed surreal to be on the same battlefield as the battle. I was ecstatic that you had the opportunity to visit Gettysburg. Hugs and Blessings Debra
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January 9, 2022 at 2:26 PM
Marvelous story -- I once helped the spirit of an earthbound American Indian Medicine Man ascend. I will never forget, I saw this enormous spirit, the size of a continent, rise up from the center of earth, and proceed heavenly (up anyway) -- that seems to be the right direction. It was quite stirring emotionally -- something I yet remember though many years later.
Brown Avatar
January 9, 2022 at 2:41 PM
Thank you for your comment, Joe. That would have been a fascinating experience to have. That is something I am sure you will never forget. Thanks for sharing that. Blessings ~ Debra
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