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A Frozen Scene

A frozen window From the cold weather Slowly starts to melt Then a scene appears A couple embraces Two dead trees on the ground One boy with a flute Plays a merry tune Owls in a tree Sleeping on a bough Two foxes on watch To hunt for a meal These scenes in the woods Is what I have seen On a window pane That begins to melt

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Dennis Spilchuk

Date: 12/18/2018 11:29:00 AM

Capturing of the imagination in times of cold weather in a warm home. Christmas wishes.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/19/2018 9:56:00 AM

Hello Denis,this is what i have seen on a frozen window. As the ice was melting. Thank you for the lovely comment. Merry Christmas to you. Have a nice day my friend.

John Lawless

Date: 2/2/2018 6:58:00 AM

a very intriguing write Darlene. The images shifting on the window pane...and stimulating the imagination....very nicely done..

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/2/2018 10:48:00 AM

Hello John,thank you for your lovely comment.These are the images I have seen on a window,while the ice was melting. Have a nice day my friend.

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 1/31/2018 7:59:00 PM

A winter wonderland is what I imagine when reading your fine poem Darlene…suddenly I feel the need for a sweater too; brrr!~Che :)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/1/2018 8:00:00 AM

Hello Cheryl,yes it is a winter land out here. When it gets colder than usual,the window frost up then starts to melt , then a scene is seen on the window. the window scene always changes.Have a nice day my friend.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/22/2018 6:21:00 PM

Wow! Liked it! The images are vivid, and unpretentious....Stray, tongue-in-cheek thought time: Rohrschach didn't have to spend all that money inventing that psychological test--you know, the one with the "two butterflies." He needed your good counsel!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/23/2018 7:42:00 AM

Yes you are right there is a lot to see on a frozen window that begins to melt. The scene always changes. have a nice day my friend.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 1/21/2018 11:41:00 AM

I remember doing that as a child and blowing on the window to clear the frost. Love what you see on that window pane. Enjoyed your poem. love phyl

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/21/2018 1:12:00 PM

I do to, the scene always changes. I would blow on the window as well. But the frost would always come back. Have a nice day my friend.

Maria Williams

Date: 1/17/2018 5:19:00 AM

What a lovely scene you have set here, I love the imagery....Maria xxx

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/17/2018 7:31:00 AM

Maria,i never know what scene I would see on a frozen icy window. the scene always changes. Have a nice day my friend. xxx

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton

Date: 1/15/2018 2:24:00 PM

This is really beautiful. I felt like I was in the room looking out through that window. For some reason I keep hearing the song White Winter Hymnal.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/15/2018 3:14:00 PM

I am pleased that my poem made you feel this way.Enjoy your day my friend.

Alfred Berggren

Date: 1/14/2018 6:18:00 PM

Hi Dar, That window pane really has story to tell - all those wonderful scenes.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/15/2018 7:10:00 AM

Hello Alfred, a window pane always has a story to tell. Have a nice day my friend.

Silent One

Date: 1/14/2018 11:45:00 AM

Great poem Darlene...

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/14/2018 11:49:00 AM

Thank you so much S.O. It was a fun write for me. have a nice day my friend.