A Friend I Found

there, i saw a clue.. telling me about you.. simple but uniquely.true.. a friend, i found with you... you keenly hear me out.. removing all my pouts.. though, i am a bit stout.. we glide in our whereabouts.. we shared quirky jokes.. but never ever we poke.. together, we surely evoke.. genuine joy no one can soak.. holding each other hands.. reassuring gestures we lend.. whereever we do land.. obvious, thy mounting bond.. you are my friend.. my friend.. i keep you til the end.. hoping we'll never bend.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/2/2015 7:14:00 PM

Olive, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Love LINDA

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/17/2014 12:16:00 PM

love how you drew this olive a fine piece dear friend very beautifully penned

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/21/2015 3:07:00 AM

thanks much Liam.. :) I so appreciate your drop by.. :)!

James Fraser

Date: 10/13/2014 2:28:00 PM

It's great to find friends, it's a terrific feeling. A little gem is this, and I see honoured by the Soup, and deservedly so, James :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/21/2015 3:06:00 AM

Thanks much James.. :)! I am so glad you like it.. :) this a happy poem I wrote.. :)!

Cynthia Ferguson

Date: 5/15/2014 8:55:00 AM

that is put together so well, you are young too, don't stop, I did, when I was a teen I wrote, but life got busy and it took last shelf, it took years to blow the dust out of my brain and after about 3 years, I still feel I am at the beginning and need to keep improving, a just started feeling I should have left behind long ago,

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/21/2015 3:03:00 AM

Weee thanks much Cynthia.. oh yes am trying to learn and learn.. :)! thanks much!! such generous heartfelt comments inspires me to write more.. :)!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/13/2014 8:53:00 PM

hi Olive,... Nice seeing your poem featured on the poetry soups home page. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/21/2015 3:02:00 AM

WEee this is a late thank you.. :)! thanks much Lolly Linda for the support as ever.. :)!