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A Fragile Heart

A fragile heart now in its place it's the yearning for just a trace, "Take me. I'm yours", returned but naught. In your thoughts I would be forgot your soft touch did more than erase. A voice deep inside from someplace, holds out for passion rhythm graces, a flirtatious glance to be caught. A fragile heart. Kiss me, awaken me, embrace me, lift me on my feet, and lace the world around me and see what intimacy we once had sought. I can never give up the chase. A fragile heart. 10/16/2017

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Date: 10/31/2017 6:33:00 PM
Great and lovely verse, Great job on the winning placement. Congratulations! Eve, love the flow and verse very much. Write On ---James
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Date: 10/25/2017 5:05:00 PM
Gorgeous penning, Eve, I enjoyed this thoroughly - best wishes and congratulations on your well-deserved win, my friend! :-)
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Date: 10/19/2017 11:06:00 AM
Congratulations! How true! Hearts in love are fragile. Well done.
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Date: 10/18/2017 10:21:00 PM
Enjoyed this lovely Rondeau Eve, congrats on a fine placement!
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Date: 10/18/2017 4:09:00 PM
Just lovely Eve, congrats :)
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Date: 10/18/2017 10:11:00 AM
to feel such things as being awoken by intimacy... and for it to have deeper meaning than a simple hook up.... it's so important. well wrote.
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Date: 10/18/2017 4:54:00 AM
Beautiful moving poem..
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Date: 10/17/2017 3:03:00 AM
So beautiful, gentle and fragile, Eve. Good luck in the contest
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Date: 10/16/2017 9:20:00 PM
Very moving rondeau, Eve! Janice
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Eve Roper
Date: 10/16/2017 11:25:00 PM
Thank you, Janice. Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 10/16/2017 7:03:00 PM
This line caught me... "a flirtatious glance to be caught. A fragile heart." Enjoyed your poem... A wonderful evening to you
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Eve Roper
Date: 10/16/2017 11:26:00 PM
Thank you, Arturo, I'm still learning . Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 10/16/2017 4:58:00 PM
A beautiful write Eve. Your last verse is just stunning! Good luck in the contest!
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Eve Roper
Date: 10/16/2017 11:25:00 PM
Thank you, Susan, for your wonderful compliment. Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 10/16/2017 4:22:00 PM
An apt description of fragile heart and the feelings it imparts--best for a win, Eve!
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Eve Roper
Date: 10/16/2017 11:24:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay, for the inspiration. Hugs Eve ~`*

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