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Written, December 11, 2023
 

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A Fleeting Thing

I think about those days of innocence
back . . .   when I was young
I played for hours in mom's garden
                       with my pets
               among her pretty flowers
and bird songs drifting 
the world had not touched me yet
I had no scars on my soul
no pain in my heart
no nightmares haunted my dreams
I heard no whispers calling me
                   I loved my dolls
teddy bears and books
and my room at the top of the stairs
in our old home 
    the wood floors where I would slide 
and the claw foot tub
    I knew nothing of cruelty
war was not even a word yet
             I was loved
and I loved too . . . 
and that was enough
is that why those years are so cherished
so beautifully recalled
          but innocence is gone
for it is a fleeting 
             thing . . .
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Jones Avatar
December 11, 2023 at 1:01 AM
Enjoyed your reflective poem. It's often fun looking back and your poem brings those fond memories of my own to mind! Well done.
La France Avatar
December 12, 2023 at 2:49 AM
Karen, thank you so much for the comment and compliment, appreciate
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