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Winter clouds are hanging low, stitched to the horizon's hem. And the sky, a blue sapphire, streaked with white veins, a flawed gem. Trees stretch skeletal fingers, entombed within ice and snow. Yet a hint of life lingers, giving them a greenish glow. A shapeless Snowman's melting and swiftly falling apart. For freezing rain keeps pelting; shattering his crystal heart. White snowdrifts are sullied grey with patches of grassy green. And icicles warmed by day, acquire a clear liquid sheen. Night dons an ebony cloak, sealing the Sun in its tomb. And until Dawn brings them back; shadows merge in shades of gloom.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/25/2018 8:12:00 PM
Great imagery, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/26/2018 8:55:00 AM
Thanks so much Line I truly appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/18/2015 2:32:00 PM
I love how vivid this is :)
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Date: 4/18/2015 5:31:00 PM
Thanks again Sarah, your visits are most welcome. Emile.
Date: 4/5/2015 4:02:00 AM
Hi Emile.. :) I like how you coin your words to draw splendid beautiful phrases.. :)! wow!!!// olive eloisa
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Date: 4/5/2015 9:27:00 AM
Thanks Olive, I as always appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 4/4/2015 1:30:00 AM
Magical....
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Date: 4/4/2015 7:09:00 AM
Thanks Nandita, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 4/3/2015 6:43:00 PM
True poetry , this is what its al about Emile! Great poems that is not the gloom! :) A7
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Date: 4/4/2015 7:11:00 AM
Thanks Arthur, I appreciate all your support. Emile.
Date: 4/3/2015 2:53:00 PM
Love this Emile...great imagery with the snowman...here's to brighter days...Tim
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Date: 4/3/2015 3:16:00 PM
Thanks Tim, I'm with you, here's to brighter days! Emile.
Date: 4/3/2015 2:11:00 PM
wonderful vivid imagery Emile - I love the contrast in each stanza:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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Date: 4/3/2015 3:15:00 PM
Thanks Jan, your visits are always so pleasant. Emile.

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