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Branches piled with heavy snow bend under its icy weight. And dark clouds gather into inky blots that bruise the sky. Twilight retreats into night moments before I arrive. And a loud cough greets my knock as sounds of life stir within. Hank has lived in this old shack since the trees were mere saplings. And the door opens to a smile warmly inviting me in. Each year just before Christmas I bring Hank some provisions. And late at night we spin yarns while staring into the fire. You couldn't pay me enough for one of Hanks’s toothless grins. And for many years I’ve come without seeking thanks or praise. The day my knock’s unanswered I’ll know Hank has left this Earth. And I will cry, as I bid my friend a final goodbye.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/25/2018 8:42:00 PM
Lovely relationship. Well penned, Emile.
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Date: 5/26/2018 8:44:00 AM
Thanks Line, your comments and support are always welcome my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/24/2017 10:45:00 PM
Wonderful write Emile :) "inky blots that bruise the sky" I know there's so much more to this poem but gotta say awesome line xomo
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Date: 9/25/2017 8:18:00 AM
Thanks Maureen, your comments and support are always welcome my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/24/2017 8:13:00 PM
Heartfelt and touching. A special friend is comfort to the soul. Amazing write that you feel deep in your heart Emile, releasing many emotions...
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Date: 9/24/2017 8:42:00 PM
Thanks so much Michael, you are right, this has released a lot of emotion my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/24/2017 6:55:00 PM
What a sweet friendship you have, and how well you put it in words. I know Hank thinks about losing you, too! It's not a one-way street.
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Date: 9/24/2017 8:41:00 PM
Thanks Sunlite, your comments and support are always welcome my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/24/2017 5:22:00 PM
You have led a privileged life, Emile -- and you are man enough to know it! God bless and keep you and your friend always. My most sincere respects! :) john
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Date: 9/24/2017 5:41:00 PM
Thanks so much John, you give my words meaning my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/24/2017 4:51:00 PM
A special poem about your friend Emile :)
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Date: 9/24/2017 5:40:00 PM
Thanks Heidi, you know how much I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

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