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A Fathers Perspective

I was scared oh so scared Seeing my baby that way Her tiny little body Was all purple and grey My heart feared the worst I thought she was gone Down a dark corridor My mind had been drawn My heart became joyful When the doctor touched her feet A crying pink angel This proud papa would meet I waited to hold her A truly special day The cutest thing ever What else can I say Moments become years Special memories are made Ones that are important In my heart I've replayed Like watching musicals Nick naming her, Gal Sal My Christina would giggle Her daddy's little pal Her happy disposition Would always make me smile I treasured each moment Saved them in a mental file Like learning to ride a bike Needing to do it alone I loved the look of triumph When she did it on her own My little daughter growing Still daddy's little girl Her my special angel A treasure and a pearl My spirits had been low She went with me on a walk I felt so much better Christina let me talk She had become a woman Sensitive, wise and kind Within her heart a treasure My answer I would find Cruising down a river In China mile by mile Wishing for forever Yet it passed in just a while Still I can remember I really saw her that day Travelling on her own path She had found her special way Now today on her Wedding I could not be more proud There's special in her quiet She is strong although not loud I entrust her to Michael My most precious gift On the strong wings of prayer Together may God lift I wrote this poem using My wife Mary's, brother inlaw's memories. Today July 26th, 2014 is his daughter's wedding day. May God bless Christina and Mike's union.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/22/2014 11:20:00 AM
So touching and straight from the heart. I've just recently been blessed with a second niece just two days ago. Now been an uncle five times over... tender writing, my friend!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/22/2014 1:25:00 PM
Congratulations Timothy, I am sure you are a terrific uncle.
Date: 8/10/2014 9:20:00 AM
Wow...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/13/2014 3:47:00 PM
Thanks Talicia
Date: 7/29/2014 10:10:00 PM
What a terrific uncle you are Rick, I do hope Christina's dad read this at the wedding? You gave them both such a wonderful gift....words from the heart. Lovely written. Hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/13/2014 3:48:00 PM
Hi Cecilia, thanks you are kind. A big hug to you as well.
Date: 7/29/2014 1:47:00 PM
Howdy Richard...wanted to stop in and say hi. It's been a while. Hope you are well. Im glad I clicked on this poem...takes me back to the day when my daughter was born...she made me happier than I've ever been...and still does every day. She's 9 now...and it seems time has flew by just like you say. I wish I could do it all over again. Anyway...great writing, Richard!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/13/2014 3:49:00 PM
Hi Caleb, life is so busy these days. I will head over and see what you have been up to.
Date: 7/27/2014 6:21:00 AM
This is so beautiful. It brought tears and memories of my daughter's wedding day.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/27/2014 8:01:00 AM
Thanks Monterey.
Date: 7/26/2014 7:09:00 PM
Very very very cute one Richard!! Seriously loved it!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/27/2014 8:00:00 AM
Thanks Saba,
Date: 7/26/2014 8:27:00 AM
Wow! Richard, this is truly a wonderful gift for your wife's brother in law and his daughter on her wedding day. I have tried to write poems like this of another's memories and it has been difficult for me. You my friend have done a great job with this one. Very nice.... Robert.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/26/2014 8:30:00 AM
Thanks Robert, what a nice comment.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/26/2014 8:27:00 AM
Thanks Scott, I tried to do Peter's memories justice.
Date: 7/26/2014 8:21:00 AM
I thought that these were your memories. You have written a magnificent poem. A real touching read.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/26/2014 8:29:00 AM
Hi Scott my response for you jumped up to Robert.
Date: 7/25/2014 9:45:00 PM
You have a father's heart...proud and true, loving and kind, spiritual. An amazing father....Lovely write, Richard. :) Beautiful!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/25/2014 11:46:00 PM
I have often imagined what it would be like to have a Daughter. I think Peter will be beaming tomorrow when Christina walks down the isle.
Date: 7/25/2014 9:06:00 AM
How blessed you are to have such an amazing daughter... I have all sons. As I begin my journey now with two granddaughters, I hope to enjoy some of the jewels you've described here too! A wonderful tribute Richard!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/26/2014 7:26:00 AM
That indeed would be a blessing, instead I have been blessed with a wonderful son. See note above to understand how this poem came to be.
Date: 7/25/2014 6:18:00 AM
Dear Richard: Very nice write. Lovely read. Leon
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/25/2014 7:58:00 AM
Thanks Leon
Date: 7/24/2014 8:38:00 PM
so I can see a mama bear down here saying that this is not a true story . You sure had me fooled!!! WEll, happy wedding to her, whoever she might be. Cute poem!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/24/2014 9:00:00 PM
She is my wife's niece and the poem is written from her Dad's perspective. The memories are all his. The wedding is on Saturday, we are very much looking forward to celebrating with Christina and Mike. The proud papa is Peter.
Date: 7/24/2014 3:19:00 PM
Is there something I do not know about? When did I get this wonderful granddaughter? LOL Think maybe you have been holding out on your poor old mother Terrific write. Love you Mom
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/24/2014 3:23:00 PM
Sorry no grand daughter for you. I wrote this one from Peter's perspective for Christina's wedding. Love ya mom.
Date: 7/24/2014 11:25:00 AM
Wow a lovely emotional write my friend! Teared my eyes , cud really feel the affection my great dad had for me ! Thnx for sharing!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/24/2014 3:28:00 PM
Thanks Dr. Upma, we are now face book Friends.
Date: 7/24/2014 10:09:00 AM
Aww, that is cool Richard. great words, real and awesome
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Casarah Nance
Date: 7/24/2014 1:08:00 PM
thanks, i appreciate that, for I have missed a lot while my service was down. I better get busy I got a lot of words to read :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/24/2014 10:18:00 AM
So great to have you back Casarah, you have been missed.
Date: 7/24/2014 9:46:00 AM
Oh Richard this is a delightful poem from start to finish. May they have many many happy years together. Hugs Jan xxx
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/24/2014 9:49:00 AM
I have no doubt that they will. Thanks Jan.
Date: 7/24/2014 9:42:00 AM
Congrats to her on her special day Richard.. You must be one proud dad.
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Tim Smith
Date: 7/24/2014 9:48:00 AM
He must be honored that you did this...very well done
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/24/2014 9:45:00 AM
Actually she is not my daughter, she is my wife's niece. Her dad Peter wrote me about significant memories and I wrote it into a poem for him.

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