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A Father Buried

A father buried in the sand; vacation rites. Waiting for the tide patiently, always, I think as I carry his coffin. Childhood Nostalgia Poetry Contest Sponsored by: JCB Brul Date wrote: 6th August 2022

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 8/31/2022 3:04:00 PM

Very moving write Terry. Congratulations on a well-deserved win! Linda

Terry Miller
Date: 9/1/2022 12:05:00 AM

Thank you so much

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/31/2022 8:54:00 AM

Avery touching memory during tough times. Congratulations on your top contest win, Terry. And thanks for your comment on my page.

Terry Miller
Date: 9/1/2022 12:05:00 AM

Thank you, and you're welcome!

Francine Roberts

Date: 8/31/2022 8:41:00 AM

what a touching piece in so few lines, congrats

Terry Miller
Date: 9/1/2022 12:06:00 AM

Thank you.

Jeff Kyser

Date: 8/6/2022 4:53:00 AM

Excellent memory during a difficult moment

Terry Miller
Date: 8/13/2022 12:36:00 AM

Thank you Jeff