Notes About The Poem

A Faraway Place

Some of the most beautiful moments in time 
are those that arrive unexpectedly and leave 
indelible traces on the heart.          ~ by poet


'pon Winter's wind a voice called to me
In barely a whisper, he repeated my name
It was as if he was asking a tender plea
Magically, nothing near me looked the same
for time had drawn me into Victorian years.

I found myself in a beautiful, faraway place
where there was no one I recognized.
It was not a sense of fear I was feeling
but my thoughts were reeling and my eyes ~
My eyes were on the brink of spilling tears.

A hand reached out and turned me around.
I felt very small for his height made me look up
In this man's visage I thought I would drown
Then he offered me wassail in an antique cup
I knew not from where he had simply appeared.

Not one single word did either of us speak
We stood side by side as it began to snow
He brushed a crystalline flake from my cheek
and in a deep but gentle voice he whispered low ~
"Have you ever read a Sonnet of Shakespeare's?"

Odd, I thought as the crystals kept tumbling down.
"He wrote in one, comparing snowflakes to kisses."
His smile reached his eyes and erased his frown.
I could only nod, not knowing who this man is
or that we seemed to be inside some kind of sphere.

He took my arm and led me to a gazebo for cover.
By now, he must have thought me to be a mute.
An assumption quite untrue, he would soon discover
when questions I asked proved me to be astute.
So many that he finally put his hands over his ears.

Patiently, he replied with quandaries of his own,
"Has there been something missing from your life?
Fate led you here, Lass. On the wind you were blown.
Could you live inside this fantasy world without strife?
If you can, then Truly I say ~ you belong with me here.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Rodrigues Avatar
October 17, 2024 at 10:25 AM
Congrats on POTW (belated). Delightful!
Bartley Avatar
October 9, 2024 at 7:55 PM
Simply wonderful. Congrats on your POTW.
Lane Avatar
October 11, 2024 at 11:10 AM
Thank you kindly, Benjamin.
Seeker Avatar
October 8, 2024 at 7:33 AM
A sublime dream! Why wake up? Warmest congratulations on POTW, Lin, really enjoyed the poem, beautifully penned
Lane Avatar
October 8, 2024 at 7:58 AM
Hello Seeker and thank you for your fine thoughts. Living in such a place... why wake up is a great question.
Beaufort Avatar
October 8, 2024 at 6:05 AM
Lin, this has me thinking about relationships and how we interact with each other. It's never easy to be in a perfect place though we try our best to make it good. You have such talent and are making me smile!!!
Lane Avatar
October 8, 2024 at 6:33 AM
I'm delighted to bring a smile to your face, Duke. Thanks!
Meadows Avatar
October 8, 2024 at 12:44 AM
Congratulations on your POTW. Well done.
Lane Avatar
October 8, 2024 at 1:21 AM
Thanks a bunch, Daisy.
Greenhough Avatar
October 7, 2024 at 5:19 AM
This is positively enchanting. A Faraway Place is a perfect poem for POTW.
Lane Avatar
October 7, 2024 at 8:00 AM
Thank you very much, Hilda. It seems like such a wonderful place.
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October 7, 2024 at 1:30 AM
So lovely and creative Lin. A wonderful write, congratulations on receiving poem of the week… Beryl
Lane Avatar
October 7, 2024 at 1:37 AM
Good morning, Beryl and thank you very much.
M  Avatar
October 6, 2024 at 11:46 PM
Beautiful , brilliant…. romance at its finest Lin! You are one gifted lady my friend….l know l am repeating myself but it has to be said hehe!! Congrats on POTW you so deserve it! Debx
Lane Avatar
October 6, 2024 at 11:52 PM
Dear Deb and good afternoon to you. I never tire of reading your comments, my sweet friend. Thank you.
Baker Avatar
October 6, 2024 at 2:12 PM
Congratulations on your fine POTW, Lin! I enjoyed reading your poetry today. Enjoy your special week of recognition my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Lane Avatar
October 6, 2024 at 11:39 PM
Thank you very much, Bill.
La France Avatar
October 6, 2024 at 11:36 AM
Lin, absolutely beautiful, and a big congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE WEEK honor, Constance
Lane Avatar
October 6, 2024 at 1:25 PM
Thank you, Constance. I'm delighted by your review.
Fowler Avatar
October 6, 2024 at 8:12 AM
What a special ad hoc encounter you have created in a fantasy world Lin. Congratulations on your POTW! :)
Lane Avatar
October 6, 2024 at 1:25 PM
Thanks so very much for your thoughtful comments, Linda.
Goldsmith Avatar
October 6, 2024 at 8:02 AM
Congratulations on your POTW win. A lovely/romantic write with a great ending. What a great/true quote you have here. I love everything about this. Your pen/imagination were working overtime on this masterpiece. Have a blessed day with your wonderful win.......................
Lane Avatar
October 6, 2024 at 8:25 AM
Hello, Paula and thanks so much for your ongoing support of my poetry. There are times when my imagination goes in the opposite direction in which I intended, but when it comes to poetry, I'm just along for the ride and follow where it leads me.
Koplin Avatar
October 6, 2024 at 7:18 AM
What a beautiful write my friend. I’m glad to see that your talent is once again recognized in Potw! Well done!
Lane Avatar
October 6, 2024 at 8:19 AM
Hi, Mark. It's so good to see you here and wish you had time to be with us more often, but we all have things more important in our lives. You are missed and thank you for taking the time to leave me such welcome thoughts.
Rodgers Avatar
October 6, 2024 at 6:32 AM
Dear Lin, As I read this POTW I thought how beautifully you captured the magic of unexpected encounters and timeless moments. You transported me to a Victorian wonderland, where reality blends with fantasy. You have created a dreamlike atmosphere that lingers in my mind long after reading. Congrats! Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Lane Avatar
October 6, 2024 at 6:57 AM
Thanks ever so much for your fine review, Daniel. Wouldn't it be a magical place if reality and fantasy could blend without unwanted intrusions? The thought of living in such a place will linger in my mind as well.
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October 6, 2024 at 6:31 AM
Congratulations on POTW! Have a lovely day :) xomo
Lane Avatar
October 6, 2024 at 6:55 AM
Thank you very much, Mo. Enjoy your Sunday.
Kitchin Avatar
October 6, 2024 at 4:24 AM
Lin, a wonderfully romantic poem with a little mystery, congratulations on POTW!
Lane Avatar
October 6, 2024 at 4:34 AM
Morning, Tania and thanks. A little mystery keeps things interesting ;-)
Culverhouse Avatar
October 6, 2024 at 2:45 AM
Interesting tale you spin, quite a story, and well done for potw Lin, congratulations
Lane Avatar
October 6, 2024 at 3:00 AM
A fantasy realm that was given life, Clive. Thank you for the congratulations.
Read Avatar
October 6, 2024 at 2:28 AM
A well deserved poem of the week have a lovely day Lin. God bless you.
Lane Avatar
October 6, 2024 at 2:59 AM
Thank you for your kind thoughts, John.
Cunningham Avatar
October 6, 2024 at 2:27 AM
You're a true romantic Lin, big congratulations to you on the honour of POTW, we'll deserved too. Tom
Lane Avatar
October 6, 2024 at 2:59 AM
Morning, Tom. I'm not sure if that's a blessing or a curse. lol but I thank you for always being supportive of my poetry.
Allison Avatar
October 6, 2024 at 2:15 AM
Oh gosh Lin this is a romantic masterpiece and so worthy of POTW, many congrats. I wish I could write romantic lines like this but as you know the majority of my stuff is silly and often poopy! hugs jan xx
Lane Avatar
October 6, 2024 at 2:24 AM
Thank you very much, Jan. What you write brings smiles to many faces. Not so with my romantic poetry but it seems to be the kind of writing that appeals to my senses. Poem of the week, huh? That's certainly surprising.
Willason Avatar
October 4, 2024 at 7:56 PM
You have an enviable quota of imagination my dear Lin, able to weave such spellbinding stories and aided by formidable language skills...the full package. The verse is a pleasure to read, so well constructed. Thanks for opening a magical door into a faraway place...so enjoyed my visit. Cheers, Paul
Lane Avatar
October 5, 2024 at 12:22 AM
Dear Paul, thank you for entering through the door and finding something magical when you crossed the threshold. I always find your in-depth comments very encouraging.
Flood Avatar
October 4, 2024 at 5:23 PM
Charming, Lin. I’m seriously impressed by your use of words that don’t look like they rhyme… but do! Enjoyed the romance (contrary to popular belief… I am human), but I do suspect that he had an ulterior motive… Hey! It’s your dream ;-)
Lane Avatar
October 4, 2024 at 5:32 PM
Hi, Terry. I love that you find it charming, then bash the mysterious gentlemen for having ulterior motives. LOL This kind of comment is SO you. Thank goodness you ARE human. There are too many AI gremlins spoiling the soup. We should boil them in some kind of broth and put THAT soup on the menu! Seriously... thank you. I'll let you know if Romeo turns out to be one of those gremlins.
One Avatar
October 4, 2024 at 11:09 AM
You are a wonderful poetic story teller, especially on the theme of romance... I'm a big believer in fate and universe, we always find our beloved eventually..
Lane Avatar
October 4, 2024 at 11:20 AM
Thank you very much. I've always appreciated your support on my poetry... going back some 9 years. I'm doomed to be a romantic, if in fact that is a sentence to carry, a burden to bear as an albatross around my neck. I haven't noticed posts from you for a while. Hope all is well in your world and have a fine weekend.
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