A Fantasy Dream

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Dream a house on Behance

Would love a mansion built into a jagged cliff wall above crashing waves . . . A place secluded from life where I feel safe from the world _______________________ November 15, 2022 Poetry/Tanka/A Fantasy Dream Copyright Protected, ID 11-1502-376-15 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Written for the Premiere contest, A New Hiku, Footle, Tanka sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 11/18/2022

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 11/15/2022 7:41:00 PM

Lovely dream, Constance and quite a matching pic:)

Constance La France
Date: 11/15/2022 11:20:00 PM

Jo, thank you so much for the visit, comment, and compliment

Joseph May

Date: 11/15/2022 4:44:00 AM

A mansion with a beautiful view, Very nicely penned Constance

Constance La France
Date: 11/15/2022 7:28:00 AM

Joseph, thank you so much for the visit, comment and compliment, appreciate.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/15/2022 3:16:00 AM

- ... maybe safe ... but lonely ... well done, Constanse ... love the photo :) - hugs

Constance La France
Date: 11/15/2022 7:30:00 AM

Sunshine, thank you for the visit, comment and compliment, appreciate. I have often not felt safe, but never lonely, for I can go anywhere in my mind, and I WILL have internet in my cliff mansion.

Constance La France

Date: 11/15/2022 3:02:00 AM

I came across some images of house built into cliff walls and they really inspired me to write this poem.