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A Dream, Maybe

Hearts Beating, Our lips meet In tender kiss With the enchanted Glow of a golden moon, Love floats easily on the Summer breeze, spreading its soft gleams Like the flicker of distant fireflies Lingering in my dream, then, she is gone? 5-3-19 Writing Challenge 2- Its All About 10 Contest Sponsor: Dear Heart

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/2/2019 1:49:00 PM

Helllo Joseph May, You had a beautiful dream. I think you wanted it to last but you had to wake up so the dream ended. have a nice day my friend.

Constance La France

Date: 5/6/2019 10:42:00 AM

Joseph, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this excellent poem!

Joseph May
Date: 5/7/2019 11:35:00 AM

Thank you for my placement DH

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 5/6/2019 9:56:00 AM

Wonderful!

Anisha Dutta

Date: 5/5/2019 11:25:00 PM

CONGRATS to win. She is coming back on next dream.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 5/5/2019 7:11:00 PM

Congratulations Joseph, on this win. :) Brandy

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/5/2019 3:39:00 PM

Congrats, Joseph, on a very well deserved win!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/4/2019 7:05:00 AM

A sweet dream this is--beautiful poem Joseph.

Joseph May
Date: 5/4/2019 10:41:00 AM

Thank you Vijay

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/4/2019 6:48:00 AM

Beautifully written Joseph :)

Joseph May
Date: 5/4/2019 10:40:00 AM

Thank you Heidi..

Brandy Nicole

Date: 5/3/2019 10:59:00 PM

This is so beautiful and romantic. Perfect in every way. In a dream, the possibilities are endless. Perhaps she will caress your thoughts again, as you drift along the stars. On another night, in a different dream. I wish to place this in my favorites. :) Brandy

Joseph May
Date: 5/4/2019 6:25:00 AM

Thank you Brandy, and thanks for making it a fave...

Briauna Brown

Date: 5/3/2019 7:52:00 PM

Enjoyed the read and the story you tell! I hate to be nit picky but I wanted to point out that line #9 actually has 10 syllables instead of 9. Really enjoy your work and I hope you have good luck in the contest! Best wishes! XOXO - Briauna

Joseph May
Date: 5/4/2019 6:24:00 AM

Thank you Briauna..