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"The thirst for happiness is never extinguished . .  "

Jean-Jacques Rousseau,

Philosopher, Writer, 1712-1778

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there are no guarantees in this life (will there even be a tomorrow?) each day is a gift and I have learned to live in precious moments as days unfold . . . and I am excited and grateful for one more dawn, one more day I do have some wishes and dreams though (not big ones really) and one is to be . . . the best writer and poet I can be in my lifetime (it is a work in progress, half way there !) my grandma is the reason I am a writer at all she encouraged a little girl to "write it" "write it, for the world to read" from silly little girl scribbles to real poetry a poet was born . . . I dream of a world free of this pandemic we have for a vaccine available to every single person on earth and when the travel restrictions are lifted and I can breathe without a mask restricting me I want to explore my own country from coast to coast the vast and beautiful Canada her crystal clear rivers and lakes her green lush forests find the northern lights my native roots . . . and even visit France the home of my ancestors it is just a dream I have . . . and to sketch and paint the birds and flowers I encounter along the way keeping a nature journal of my journey of this bucket list dream . . . and maybe one day to find love again for my life is a garden ravaged since death took my one true love, it is time and it is another dream I dream _ ______________________ November 6, 2020 Poetry/Free Verse/a dream, I dream Copyright Protected, ID 11-1300-685-06 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Written for the contest, What Have You Kicked Off On Your Bucket List sponsor, Chantelle Anne Cooke, Judged 12/05/20 First Place

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Date: 12/8/2020 9:29:00 AM
you already ARE a wonderful poet and i hope you get to achieve your other wishes, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/9/2020 10:41:00 AM
Jan, thank you for that, I am always trying to grow, to try new forms, etc .. thank you for the congrats _Constance
Date: 12/8/2020 8:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a "Beautiful" write. You are a wonderful poet. Your grandma is very happy. I pray all your dreams come true. Enjoy your win with blessings...............
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Date: 12/8/2020 8:04:00 AM
Paula, thanks for the congratulations, the compliment and the comment, appreciate a lot _Constance
Date: 12/8/2020 2:56:00 AM
Lovely dreams, Constance. I enjoyed your lovely write and will always pray for your heart to be filled with joy and hope. You're an inspiration to many. God bless you sweet friend and congrats on your win!
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Date: 12/8/2020 7:13:00 AM
Gina, thanks for the lovely and the comment and the congrats _Constance
Date: 12/6/2020 2:42:00 PM
To find love again, I understand. How wonderful that you are already fantastic. poet. That your creative talent runs from your pen to a paintbrush. I've just switched from brush to pen and have a long way to go, but little time as I'm 82 but. young attitude and fiesty...CONGRATS!
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Date: 12/7/2020 1:34:00 PM
Barbara, thank you for the lovely comment, and congrats, age is just a number _Constance
Date: 12/6/2020 11:20:00 AM
Beautiful, sad, nostalgic, and real. Your poetic grace shines. I'm thankful your grandmother planted the seed and nourished it. I loved your line "a work in progress, half way there"... I so relate! Congratulations on your win, Constance. Enjoy your day ~ John
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Date: 12/7/2020 1:35:00 PM
John, thank you for the wonderful comment, compliment and congratulations, grateful _Constance
Date: 12/5/2020 5:52:00 PM
Beautiful write Constance! Love in love with love for love alone, is aflame within! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 12/7/2020 1:36:00 PM
Seeker, thanks for the congrats and compliment _Constance
Date: 12/5/2020 1:16:00 PM
Your grandmother saw a special talent in you, Constance. I'm so glad she encouraged you to write. Let's not wait too long before exploring France. I'd love to join you. Congrats on your top win!! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 12/7/2020 1:39:00 PM
Carolyn, thanks for the congrats, and lovely comment, yes, grandma is the reason I write, she told me to write what I was feeling in my heart and I never stopped, she told me words were powerful and when I spoke at her funeral and all I could hear was weeping in the church, I knew it was true _Constance
Date: 11/6/2020 7:17:00 PM
Most beautifully written, Constance, in that signature elegant style. You have achieved so much already with your writing! May you go on and on and on!!
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Date: 11/7/2020 8:59:00 AM
Andrea, thanks you for the lovely comment, it means a lot to me _Constance
Date: 11/6/2020 7:13:00 PM
Oh,Ms Constance, I am totally with you. I just want to be able to go straight to work and not have to turn around because I forgot my stupid mask... Lol! We are all longing. Beautifully said my dear friend. And good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 11/7/2020 9:01:00 AM
Kina, thanks for the visit and comment, and compliment, oh yes, I really hate those masks no matter what pretty pattern they are made with, a mask is a mask _Constance

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