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A stanza or poem consisting of four lines. In the basic form, Lines 2 and 4 must rhyme  while having a similar number of syllables. 

In my youth, I found a decaying house, and ignored the whispers; it was haunted. Its rotten porch and roof were in shambles, but lots of fun things were left unwanted. Every kid knows, nothing's more alluring than an old building with an unlocked door. I couldn't wait to bust out a window, this was my opportunity to score. I'd spend hours searching through the rubble, providing days of exploring pleasure. And I was never bored with playing there, to preteens, such finds are a rare treasure. Ferns flourished where a rose garden once grew, yielding a spring crop of fiddlehead. And a white rosette-shaped trellis lays broken, jutting out, like the bleached bones of the dead. (Quatrain) 07/14/2020

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Date: 7/27/2020 4:27:00 AM
I can relate to the thrills of exploring abandoned decaying places in childhood and adulthood. Most of the times there are decaying stories that we may never know. You've expressed the sadness beautifully Emile. Congratulations on your win my friend :)
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Date: 7/27/2020 6:45:00 AM
Thanks Aditi, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/25/2020 9:19:00 AM
Emile, congratulations on your win in my decaying house contest with this excellence write, a FAV for me and I love the image too _Constance
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Date: 7/25/2020 12:00:00 PM
Thanks Constance, I appreciate the placement my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/22/2020 1:12:00 PM
Wow this is spectacular Emile! I love your metaphor at the ending which details the sorrow of the house becoming dead as well. Congratulations on your wonderful first place win which is so deserving! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 7/22/2020 2:16:00 PM
Thanks so much Connie, it always cheers me up when I hear from you my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/22/2020 6:30:00 AM
Beautiful piece! Congrats on your win, Emile! Love it.
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Date: 7/22/2020 2:15:00 PM
Thanks Krish, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/19/2020 3:57:00 PM
Love the way you used the words to show us exactly what the picture showed us but with your eloquent words. congrats in the contest, Emile.
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Date: 7/22/2020 2:15:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, as always, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/19/2020 3:40:00 PM
You made this decrepit house come alive to me. Congratulations, Emile.
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Date: 7/19/2020 5:38:00 PM
Thanks Jenna, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/19/2020 2:57:00 PM
vivid imagery Emile I especially love those final two very descriptive lines, many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/19/2020 5:38:00 PM
Thanks Jan, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/15/2020 4:19:00 AM
You make it sound fun, Emile, well written:)
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Date: 7/15/2020 8:39:00 AM
Thanks Joe, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/14/2020 7:47:00 PM
I love the imagery of your nostalgic write, Emile! Lots of luck in the contest. Blessings, Rhonda xx
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Date: 7/15/2020 8:38:00 AM
Thanks Rhonda, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/14/2020 3:26:00 PM
Well written , Emile, perfect for Constance contest. Just like a boy wanting to break a window. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/14/2020 5:15:00 PM
Thanks Eve, you honor me my friend, Emile.

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