A Death and a Coronation

 
Over the west Sun dies, oozing blood, The hillside glows in a ruddy blaze, Pink and crimson fade slowly around, And a pallid shade taints the twilight haze. By and by, darkness descends like foggy mist, Wrapping the Earth in a blanket of gloom And God turns on his ornate chandeliers To illumine the world in effulgent gleam Attended by a cortege of starry maids The Full Moon arrives in her glowing raiment Evading the amorous presence of clouds She enthrones herself before the royal regiment So glad she is in her princely state And in her fair mien, she takes delight Bards and lovers have often been mesmerized By such charm surpassing all that is bright Beaming, she gives the night its nocturnal glee Beckoning us heavenward to gaze and praise. With benign grace and regal grandeur she smiles On kings and clowns and on all the human race She changes her contours with every unleashing night Constantly renewing and reveling as a glamorous queen She leaves the world aglow beneath the blue sky Lending the night its unrivaled celestial sheen
Feb.26. 2022 The Night Sky Poetry Contest Sponsor- Anna Marie Kaianah
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Date: 5/5/2022 10:56:00 AM
Congratulations and high fives Valsa for this Arthurian like poem of tribute to the regal moon with awesome phrases - "lending the night its unrivaled celestial sheen,' "nocturnal glee," "amorous presence of clouds." Your creativity and talent shine like a night with a full moon of grace. Your poetic expression always captures my imagination! Thank you for that gift! Blessings dear friend!
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Date: 5/1/2022 12:51:00 PM
So many fantastic night sky poems I am seeing, and this one just as incredible as the next. Congrats in the contest.
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Date: 5/1/2022 6:51:00 AM
"Sun dies, oozing blood" - You have murdered the sun (fun)! Entire poem is very beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/1/2022 12:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Valsa! I enjoyed reading your poem! <3 ~Anna Kaianah
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Date: 3/1/2022 10:28:00 AM
Valsa George you are one talented poetess, you express yourself with such eloquence and create gems which delight all us readers around the world, this write is no exception, kudos my friend! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 2/28/2022 1:20:00 PM
Such a lovely piece Valsa with superb imagery and insightful thought.
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Date: 2/28/2022 11:26:00 AM
I like this part the best "With benign grace and regal grandeur she smiles On kings and clowns and on all the human race"
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Date: 2/27/2022 3:40:00 PM
On kings and clowns and on all the human race! Great read, Valsa!
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Date: 2/26/2022 7:32:00 PM
Never dreamed of the Moon as royalty. Thanks for lighting my imagination, Valsa. Moonbeams and Starlight, Gershon
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Date: 2/26/2022 10:28:00 AM
Nicely done! The beauty between black and white are the intriguing shadows which inspire artists and poets . . . .
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Date: 2/26/2022 4:55:00 AM
Much enjoyed the scenic description of your opening stanzas and it gets even better with a delightful ode to moon. A wonderful journey through a beautiful night, Valsa.
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Date: 2/26/2022 12:42:00 AM
The fading of day and the beauty of night captured well in your verse Valsa. Good luck Tom
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