A Dark Spell

A Dark Spell

I dreamed I was a boy of ten
With hair of raven black.
I wandered down a faerie glen
And never made it back.

I met a pair of ancient crones
Their kingdom was a dell,
They lured me in with dulcet tones
And cast o’er me a spell.

The spell was baked inside a pie
I’d gobbled down with glee.
The filling, full of fruit and fly
My head buzzed like a bee.

I morphed into a big black crow,
Or maybe I’m a rook?
They put me in a cage, and lo,
I’m hanging from a hook.

The wizard whispered soft to me
‘Don’t worry, do not fret.
To break the spell, and so be free
Recite the alphabet.’

I cawed and cawed with all my might,
It was an awful sound.
The old witch danced in sheer delight,
My voice would not be found.

When darkness fell, I could but croak,
My throat was raw and sore.
Then sunrise came, and I awoke
The nightmare was no more.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mehta Avatar
March 30, 2010 at 8:33 PM
Congrats for the nice dream
Richards Avatar
March 28, 2010 at 10:40 AM
What a terrific imagination you have, Margaret...loved your interpretation of this contest! Congratulations on your win! Love, Carrie
White Avatar
March 28, 2010 at 3:23 AM
Nice, nice Congrats Margaret I'm glad they didn't get me!
Sweetheart Avatar
March 27, 2010 at 8:14 PM
Congrats Margaret on your winning poem in the I Dreamed contest.. an excellent poem and wonderful win for u to so enjoy as u walk to the winners circle..luv.. Linda-Marie
Johnson Avatar
March 27, 2010 at 6:30 PM
This is great. I would put it up right at the top with the others. Great dream. Love, Joyce
Frew Avatar
March 24, 2010 at 7:49 PM
great write,thanks!
Clark Avatar
March 11, 2010 at 4:30 PM
Awesome poetry, especially for the dream contest! It flows so nicely! Thank you for the kind comments and visiting my work. Best Jeralynn
Dietrich Avatar
March 11, 2010 at 1:02 PM
Very good one for that contest, Margaret, not the usual fairies! I hope it does well. Andrea
Dufresne Avatar
March 11, 2010 at 4:22 AM
Love yoiur imaginative write, Margaret. Well done in so many ways. Inspiring to say the least. Enjoyed it! Robert
White Avatar
March 11, 2010 at 3:31 AM
That was so good ty for the read
Nutter Avatar
March 11, 2010 at 2:52 AM
I like thre dark writes, the flow and rhyme were perfect, excellent write
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