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A Dark Spell

A Dark Spell I dreamed I was a boy of ten With hair of raven black. I wandered down a faerie glen And never made it back. I met a pair of ancient crones Their kingdom was a dell, They lured me in with dulcet tones And cast o’er me a spell. The spell was baked inside a pie I’d gobbled down with glee. The filling, full of fruit and fly My head buzzed like a bee. I morphed into a big black crow, Or maybe I’m a rook? They put me in a cage, and lo, I’m hanging from a hook. The wizard whispered soft to me ‘Don’t worry, do not fret. To break the spell, and so be free Recite the alphabet.’ I cawed and cawed with all my might, It was an awful sound. The old witch danced in sheer delight, My voice would not be found. When darkness fell, I could but croak, My throat was raw and sore. Then sunrise came, and I awoke The nightmare was no more. Fairies of the darker kind.....

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Date: 3/30/2010 8:33:00 PM
Congrats for the nice dream
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Date: 3/28/2010 10:40:00 AM
What a terrific imagination you have, Margaret...loved your interpretation of this contest! Congratulations on your win! Love, Carrie
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Date: 3/28/2010 3:23:00 AM
Nice, nice Congrats Margaret I'm glad they didn't get me!
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Date: 3/27/2010 8:14:00 PM
Congrats Margaret on your winning poem in the I Dreamed contest.. an excellent poem and wonderful win for u to so enjoy as u walk to the winners circle..luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 3/27/2010 6:30:00 PM
This is great. I would put it up right at the top with the others. Great dream. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/24/2010 7:49:00 PM
great write,thanks!
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Date: 3/11/2010 4:30:00 PM
Awesome poetry, especially for the dream contest! It flows so nicely! Thank you for the kind comments and visiting my work. Best Jeralynn
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Date: 3/11/2010 1:02:00 PM
Very good one for that contest, Margaret, not the usual fairies! I hope it does well. Andrea
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Date: 3/11/2010 4:22:00 AM
Love yoiur imaginative write, Margaret. Well done in so many ways. Inspiring to say the least. Enjoyed it! Robert
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Date: 3/11/2010 3:31:00 AM
That was so good ty for the read
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Date: 3/11/2010 2:52:00 AM
I like thre dark writes, the flow and rhyme were perfect, excellent write
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